Anti-War Poem
Josh
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Thank you Ahavati for another sterling entry.
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The Valiant 306
Wreaths of blood red poppies
A minutes silence to remember
To commemorate the fallen
To show respect for sacrifice
I cannot join you
Heads bowed in prayer
Prayers for the dead
You honour their memory
I will not Join you
There’s no questioning why
Why they became the fallen
Why they had to die
Why they had to kill
The Valiant 306
Jack (17) crouched low
His back firmly against
The wall of the trench
He wiped the blood and
Shards of skull covering
His face and shoulders
An eye ball and chunk
Of jaw bone sat in his lap
Remains of George (18)
His best pal from home
He looked to his left
Larry (18) cried for his
Mother and his God
To help him, to save him
As he tried in vain
To stem the flow
From his bloody stumps
Jack looked to the right
Francis (16) lay slumped
Against the trench wall
Blood gushing from a
Single gun shot
Moaning and gurgling
As he drowned in
His own blood
Screaming and crying
All around, loud
Louder than gun shots
And mortar explosions
Jack (17) looses control
Bowels then bladder
Now smelling, wet and soiled
Fear takes over everything
He rolls into a ball
And rocks forwards and back
In the piss, shit, blood and mud
He covers both ears
And screams as tears
Stream sobbing uncontrollably
All of a sudden; stillness
“Get up BOY!”
“The Hun is that way
Get over the top you
Filthy coward”
Jack could see the shouting
But he couldn’t hear a word
He knew exactly what was
being asked of him
still sobbing he screamed
the most dangerous word
“NO!”
For saying no
Jack (17)
Was executed by
A firing squad
Of his own comrades
And buried un marked
A coward
Forgotten
We executed 306 valiant men
We murdered 306 brave souls
For being scared
For standing up in carnage
And saying No
They stood up against
Continuation of the slaughter
And their part in it
They were brave enough
To look death in the face
Tied to a post
Tied and repeatedly shot
A nations shame
Heroes forgotten
Branded as cowards
No commemoration
I cannot, will not
Join your parade
If you continue to
Ignore those you murdered
The valiant 306
Pardon them
Accept your shame
Accept your blame
Remember them as
Heroes walking a different path
Let me wear a poppy
To commemorate
Grandpa Jack
A minutes silence to remember
To commemorate the fallen
To show respect for sacrifice
I cannot join you
Heads bowed in prayer
Prayers for the dead
You honour their memory
I will not Join you
There’s no questioning why
Why they became the fallen
Why they had to die
Why they had to kill
The Valiant 306
Jack (17) crouched low
His back firmly against
The wall of the trench
He wiped the blood and
Shards of skull covering
His face and shoulders
An eye ball and chunk
Of jaw bone sat in his lap
Remains of George (18)
His best pal from home
He looked to his left
Larry (18) cried for his
Mother and his God
To help him, to save him
As he tried in vain
To stem the flow
From his bloody stumps
Jack looked to the right
Francis (16) lay slumped
Against the trench wall
Blood gushing from a
Single gun shot
Moaning and gurgling
As he drowned in
His own blood
Screaming and crying
All around, loud
Louder than gun shots
And mortar explosions
Jack (17) looses control
Bowels then bladder
Now smelling, wet and soiled
Fear takes over everything
He rolls into a ball
And rocks forwards and back
In the piss, shit, blood and mud
He covers both ears
And screams as tears
Stream sobbing uncontrollably
All of a sudden; stillness
“Get up BOY!”
“The Hun is that way
Get over the top you
Filthy coward”
Jack could see the shouting
But he couldn’t hear a word
He knew exactly what was
being asked of him
still sobbing he screamed
the most dangerous word
“NO!”
For saying no
Jack (17)
Was executed by
A firing squad
Of his own comrades
And buried un marked
A coward
Forgotten
We executed 306 valiant men
We murdered 306 brave souls
For being scared
For standing up in carnage
And saying No
They stood up against
Continuation of the slaughter
And their part in it
They were brave enough
To look death in the face
Tied to a post
Tied and repeatedly shot
A nations shame
Heroes forgotten
Branded as cowards
No commemoration
I cannot, will not
Join your parade
If you continue to
Ignore those you murdered
The valiant 306
Pardon them
Accept your shame
Accept your blame
Remember them as
Heroes walking a different path
Let me wear a poppy
To commemorate
Grandpa Jack
Written by David_Macleod
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Josh
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Thank you David for a great entry - I'd not heard of "The Valiant 306".
Astyanax
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November 2018
Their voices all are still - none yet remains;
Their Present now is History's sad tale,
A tale of battles, strategies, campaigns,
And youth consumed by slaughter's ceaseless flail.
From sepia prints they look us in the eye,
Together, cocky, smoking, mate by mate,
They grin at us, tin helmets tipped awry,
But tears rise from our knowledge of their fate.
We cannot glorify the war they fought,
We cannot hate the men they met in strife,
But rather, we must honour those who sought
On every side to barter death for life.
A century has passed since that cruel war,
They rest in silent sadness, evermore.
Their voices all are still - none yet remains;
Their Present now is History's sad tale,
A tale of battles, strategies, campaigns,
And youth consumed by slaughter's ceaseless flail.
From sepia prints they look us in the eye,
Together, cocky, smoking, mate by mate,
They grin at us, tin helmets tipped awry,
But tears rise from our knowledge of their fate.
We cannot glorify the war they fought,
We cannot hate the men they met in strife,
But rather, we must honour those who sought
On every side to barter death for life.
A century has passed since that cruel war,
They rest in silent sadness, evermore.
Astyanax
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Their voices all are still - none yet remains;
Their Present now is History's sad tale,
A tale of battles, strategies, campaigns,
And youth consumed by slaughter's ceaseless flail.
From sepia prints they look us in the eye,
Together, cocky, smoking, mate by mate,
They grin at us, tin helmets tipped awry,
But tears rise from our knowledge of their fate.
We cannot glorify the war they fought,
We cannot hate the men they met in strife,
But rather, we must honour those who sought
On every side to barter death for life.
A century has passed since that cruel war,
They rest in silent sadness, evermore.
Their Present now is History's sad tale,
A tale of battles, strategies, campaigns,
And youth consumed by slaughter's ceaseless flail.
From sepia prints they look us in the eye,
Together, cocky, smoking, mate by mate,
They grin at us, tin helmets tipped awry,
But tears rise from our knowledge of their fate.
We cannot glorify the war they fought,
We cannot hate the men they met in strife,
But rather, we must honour those who sought
On every side to barter death for life.
A century has passed since that cruel war,
They rest in silent sadness, evermore.
Written by Astyanax
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the need and its greed for dominance
i need a fight
don't need a cause
do no ask why
just because
i can
the man
i have
to prove
my worth
this earth
is mine
violence?
is fine
so long
i get
my hands
this land
these lands
ice
deserts
or sands
i fight
'cause might
is right
there can be no reason
to deny
me
what's nature
my nature
by nature
fight
survive
and thrive
only the
the fittest
live(s)
argument
is in vain
as pain
has no place
in nature
the place
is for the victor
war
never pretty
weak
never gritty
i need war
for your peace
and ease
to live
so forgive
when i do
what i am
born to
it
always
was
and
always
will be kill
or be killed
this is what
nature
willed
free will?
now what the hell is that?
don't need a cause
do no ask why
just because
i can
the man
i have
to prove
my worth
this earth
is mine
violence?
is fine
so long
i get
my hands
this land
these lands
ice
deserts
or sands
i fight
'cause might
is right
there can be no reason
to deny
me
what's nature
my nature
by nature
fight
survive
and thrive
only the
the fittest
live(s)
argument
is in vain
as pain
has no place
in nature
the place
is for the victor
war
never pretty
weak
never gritty
i need war
for your peace
and ease
to live
so forgive
when i do
what i am
born to
it
always
was
and
always
will be kill
or be killed
this is what
nature
willed
free will?
now what the hell is that?
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Josh
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Thank you Astyanax and cold_fusion for two more great poems entered in the comp.
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No-vember
It's right there in the title
as I muscle down another pill
sobriety a societal faux pas
a celebratory crucible of war
but we want peace
poisoned and positioned
a division
thought out to precision
cries of dispair
if it left no one would care
but we don't need war
and we don't need words
my heart bleeds your name
I know yours does the same
the ritual, the darkness of the dance
candlelight
just right
the fire in those eyes
a succulent surprise
we get lost in our minds
but I don't mind
yes you're one of a kind
the softness of you
taps love notes on my heart
as I muscle down another pill
sobriety a societal faux pas
a celebratory crucible of war
but we want peace
poisoned and positioned
a division
thought out to precision
cries of dispair
if it left no one would care
but we don't need war
and we don't need words
my heart bleeds your name
I know yours does the same
the ritual, the darkness of the dance
candlelight
just right
the fire in those eyes
a succulent surprise
we get lost in our minds
but I don't mind
yes you're one of a kind
the softness of you
taps love notes on my heart
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Josh
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Thank you JusTim for another great entry in the comp. Josh.
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Goodbye Hanoi
This far divided land
Where the rice grows free
Has always had corrupt men
Stopping their life's dreams
It's in their veins
It's not that easy
To make it flow on out
For a thousand years
The same has been
Even when a million men
Wearing blue denim jeans
Came marching in
To change our ways
It's not what this is all about
While the people we trust
Pop out of man-made holes
And look like they've been
Tunnelling like moles
Where the enemy lines
Have stood for a thousand years
During the day
We're all so polite
But in the night
We all have to go and fight
The un-invited western men
Always seem to lose sight
Their communist fears
Were ingrained in their mothers womb
And will always end in tears
Where the streets smell of Pho
As you pass on by
And if looks could kill
If you dare to say hi
The aromatic love incense
Wafts in the fog filled air
Where the market crowds come
And traders buy and sell
The lonely planet guides
Write of this unusual smell
The local giggles should tell you
That you don't really belong there
So goodbye Hanoi
This time we can't ignore the flack
I'm going home
And I ain't ever coming back
My wife is waiting
To mend me back in one piece
We've had that awful feeling
Since it all became so fierce
I want to head home so bad
Now they've invaded our embassy
When they don't want our help for a truce
And it doesn't bring the change
That the westerners wanted to produce
So just leave it in the hands of ones own chosen destiny.
Where the rice grows free
Has always had corrupt men
Stopping their life's dreams
It's in their veins
It's not that easy
To make it flow on out
For a thousand years
The same has been
Even when a million men
Wearing blue denim jeans
Came marching in
To change our ways
It's not what this is all about
While the people we trust
Pop out of man-made holes
And look like they've been
Tunnelling like moles
Where the enemy lines
Have stood for a thousand years
During the day
We're all so polite
But in the night
We all have to go and fight
The un-invited western men
Always seem to lose sight
Their communist fears
Were ingrained in their mothers womb
And will always end in tears
Where the streets smell of Pho
As you pass on by
And if looks could kill
If you dare to say hi
The aromatic love incense
Wafts in the fog filled air
Where the market crowds come
And traders buy and sell
The lonely planet guides
Write of this unusual smell
The local giggles should tell you
That you don't really belong there
So goodbye Hanoi
This time we can't ignore the flack
I'm going home
And I ain't ever coming back
My wife is waiting
To mend me back in one piece
We've had that awful feeling
Since it all became so fierce
I want to head home so bad
Now they've invaded our embassy
When they don't want our help for a truce
And it doesn't bring the change
That the westerners wanted to produce
So just leave it in the hands of ones own chosen destiny.
Written by Fetchitnow
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Josh
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Thank you Fetchitnow for your entry. Nice one.
Josh
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Writ-er, your entry doesn't fit with this comp. Josh.
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Do Not Die For Me
Do not die for me
I will not kill for you
Do not die for me
You should never have a reason to
I will not kill for you
Why is that so hard to understand?
So do not die for me
Your blood is not welcome on my hands
What price salvation, Lord?
These things that man will do
But to take a human life
There should never be a reason to
What price salvation, God?
That another man should die for me
And save the lives, with guns and bombs
Of the suppressed who would be free
Do not Die for me
I will not die for you
You need not die for me
Jesus already has
I will not kill for you
Do not die for me
You should never have a reason to
I will not kill for you
Why is that so hard to understand?
So do not die for me
Your blood is not welcome on my hands
What price salvation, Lord?
These things that man will do
But to take a human life
There should never be a reason to
What price salvation, God?
That another man should die for me
And save the lives, with guns and bombs
Of the suppressed who would be free
Do not Die for me
I will not die for you
You need not die for me
Jesus already has
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Fetchitnow
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WW2
We were ordered by military law
To elope, even before our boat had hit the shore
The bullets knocked us about, thats for sure
Dead cobbers scattered adrift, from the infantrys 1st corp
Now some mates from my own platoon, 1, 2, 3 now 4
Nobody should ever have to witness such gore
Did not matter if you were rich or poor
You were just a target, in this almighty war
If the politicians demanded, they would easily send more
Finally, the west encircled the mad beast, with a rambunctious roar
But they let the Reds go forth, who savaged all the women, like a wild boar
What was the main aim and what was the true meaning, deep down at its core, for this unholy friggin’ war?
To elope, even before our boat had hit the shore
The bullets knocked us about, thats for sure
Dead cobbers scattered adrift, from the infantrys 1st corp
Now some mates from my own platoon, 1, 2, 3 now 4
Nobody should ever have to witness such gore
Did not matter if you were rich or poor
You were just a target, in this almighty war
If the politicians demanded, they would easily send more
Finally, the west encircled the mad beast, with a rambunctious roar
But they let the Reds go forth, who savaged all the women, like a wild boar
What was the main aim and what was the true meaning, deep down at its core, for this unholy friggin’ war?
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Josh
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Thank you poetryman for your comp entry, Josh.