Poetry competition CLOSED 16th May 2015 9:57pm
WINNER
LokiOfLiterati
LokiOfLiterati
RUNNER-UP:
JohnFeddeler
Rap hastily
Anonymous
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been raping since i was seven
back when i had no haters
pretended to be a legend
inspired by the best rappers
50, Biggy, jigger and Nas
back when life sucked
February a repetition of last june
mama struggled to get me that one meal before bed
truth be told life was cold
compared to the other kids in the projects
Good Lord for me it was better
made a promise to myself that things would be better
dived in this lyrical swamp
they all thought i was crazy
reminiscing life was really a bitch
good news is after the long struggle
this bitch just made me nut, burst
call it whatever you want
now i sleep in versace pajamas
house so big it came with a zoo
Ferraris and jaguars
oh Lord im blessed
so to all the kids out there
wishing and dreaming that things will get better
im the living proof that dreams are valid
all You need is hard work to pay your bills
and never let bad energy pin your dreams
back when i had no haters
pretended to be a legend
inspired by the best rappers
50, Biggy, jigger and Nas
back when life sucked
February a repetition of last june
mama struggled to get me that one meal before bed
truth be told life was cold
compared to the other kids in the projects
Good Lord for me it was better
made a promise to myself that things would be better
dived in this lyrical swamp
they all thought i was crazy
reminiscing life was really a bitch
good news is after the long struggle
this bitch just made me nut, burst
call it whatever you want
now i sleep in versace pajamas
house so big it came with a zoo
Ferraris and jaguars
oh Lord im blessed
so to all the kids out there
wishing and dreaming that things will get better
im the living proof that dreams are valid
all You need is hard work to pay your bills
and never let bad energy pin your dreams
Anonymous
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Anonymous
All hail the conquering army of one, LokiOfLiterati, for dropping one massive lyrical bomb with killer lines flying out like shrapnel!!! 
Our Runners Up are John Feddeler and Holly Dove, who brought unique submissions to the table that were
tailored swiftly! 
Thanks everyone for your participation!
Our Runners Up are John Feddeler and Holly Dove, who brought unique submissions to the table that were
tailored swiftly! Thanks everyone for your participation!
Anonymous
Hail Loki who shook it down!
Hail John Feddeler who shook us up!
Hell with Sprinkle Spazz...she shook out her rug.
Really, all entries were a whoop to read. Thanks, Mary. :)
Hail John Feddeler who shook us up!
Hell with Sprinkle Spazz...she shook out her rug.
Really, all entries were a whoop to read. Thanks, Mary. :)
Anonymous
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Anonymous
hardallover said:mine was garbage but the first page was full of faster and more furious
And just because I requested fast and furious rhyming, I shouldn't factor in originality? Sustained momentum? Poetic use of words?
Feel free to run your own "Do Over Comp", accept the same entries and choose winners based on your own criteria. It won't hurt my feelings.
And just because I requested fast and furious rhyming, I shouldn't factor in originality? Sustained momentum? Poetic use of words?
Feel free to run your own "Do Over Comp", accept the same entries and choose winners based on your own criteria. It won't hurt my feelings.
Have to say Mary, according to your criteria, I feel somewhat overlooked, wonder why ?
Hmmmm ..... It's cool, subjective rather than objective is how these comps tend to run, but, props to the winners, it is what it is, in the end it's all fun right ???
So, come on then Typhoid, as you chose to set this up, i'm interested to know who your top five emcees are ?
Oh and as this seems as good a thread as any to avail some REAL lyricism, to which you can listen ....
One last lyrical shot !
http://bigvirge.com/?p=4131
Hmmmm ..... It's cool, subjective rather than objective is how these comps tend to run, but, props to the winners, it is what it is, in the end it's all fun right ???
So, come on then Typhoid, as you chose to set this up, i'm interested to know who your top five emcees are ?
Oh and as this seems as good a thread as any to avail some REAL lyricism, to which you can listen ....
One last lyrical shot !
http://bigvirge.com/?p=4131
Anonymous
BigVirge said:Have to say Mary, according to your criteria, I feel somewhat overlooked, wonder why ?
Hmmmm ..... It's cool, subjective rather than objective is how these comps tend to run, but, props to the winners, it is what it is, in the end it's all fun right ???
So, come on then Typhoid, as you chose to set this up, i'm interested to know who your top five emcees are ?
Oh and as this seems as good a thread as any to avail some REAL lyricism, to which you can listen ....
One last lyrical shot !
http://bigvirge.com/?p=4131
Call the shameless plug police! LoL
Life is crazy atm. Give me some time to seriously tackle this.
Hmmmm ..... It's cool, subjective rather than objective is how these comps tend to run, but, props to the winners, it is what it is, in the end it's all fun right ???
So, come on then Typhoid, as you chose to set this up, i'm interested to know who your top five emcees are ?
Oh and as this seems as good a thread as any to avail some REAL lyricism, to which you can listen ....
One last lyrical shot !
http://bigvirge.com/?p=4131
Call the shameless plug police! LoL
Life is crazy atm. Give me some time to seriously tackle this.
