Poetry competition CLOSED 29th March 2013 8:56pm
WINNER
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13
HIV/AIDS
the rapper
comes inside the house,
we were three womens, and mouse,
the screaming of my mom,
5 robers with gun,
i acted like the smart,
but i did not know how bad,
we all going to get rape,
i was getting prepare,
i said that i had aids,
something they wont take,
so they would not even try,
my mon, and my friends knew it was faked,
so here comes a man, saying that he did no care,
because, he all ready had aids.
SENA
comes inside the house,
we were three womens, and mouse,
the screaming of my mom,
5 robers with gun,
i acted like the smart,
but i did not know how bad,
we all going to get rape,
i was getting prepare,
i said that i had aids,
something they wont take,
so they would not even try,
my mon, and my friends knew it was faked,
so here comes a man, saying that he did no care,
because, he all ready had aids.
SENA
Anonymous
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what I had to say to Essie on her poem
" The Little girl, and I can only assume she is a very young girl said some stupid things when she started that comp Essie. But... seeing this shit disease up close , and personal, I would rather someone ignorantly try to help, even if it nothing more than getting the fucking word out that this crap still exist in droves, than someone intelligently stand on the side lines.
Why do I have an odd feeling you might have seen this stuff up close as well Essie ? "
" The Little girl, and I can only assume she is a very young girl said some stupid things when she started that comp Essie. But... seeing this shit disease up close , and personal, I would rather someone ignorantly try to help, even if it nothing more than getting the fucking word out that this crap still exist in droves, than someone intelligently stand on the side lines.
Why do I have an odd feeling you might have seen this stuff up close as well Essie ? "
Anonymous
MaggieG said:what I had to say to Essie on her poem
" The Little girl, and I can only assume she is a very young girl said some stupid things when she started that comp Essie. But... seeing this shit disease up close , and personal, I would rather someone ignorantly try to help, even if it nothing more than getting the fucking word out that this crap still exist in droves, than someone intelligently stand on the side lines.
Why do I have an odd feeling you might have seen this stuff up close as well Essie ? "
I know it's well intended..I am too closely involved and affected by it for sure..and though I do believe in spreading awareness blah blah..I do think this thread is offensive in the way it was stated..make it fun...rhyme..no respect, childishly ignorant to reality
" The Little girl, and I can only assume she is a very young girl said some stupid things when she started that comp Essie. But... seeing this shit disease up close , and personal, I would rather someone ignorantly try to help, even if it nothing more than getting the fucking word out that this crap still exist in droves, than someone intelligently stand on the side lines.
Why do I have an odd feeling you might have seen this stuff up close as well Essie ? "
I know it's well intended..I am too closely involved and affected by it for sure..and though I do believe in spreading awareness blah blah..I do think this thread is offensive in the way it was stated..make it fun...rhyme..no respect, childishly ignorant to reality
mikimoondancer said:[quote-182693-MaggieG]what I had to say to Essie on her poem
" The Little girl, and I can only assume she is a very young girl said some stupid things when she started that comp Essie. But... seeing this shit disease up close , and personal, I would rather someone ignorantly try to help, even if it nothing more than getting the fucking word out that this crap still exist in droves, than someone intelligently stand on the side lines.
Why do I have an odd feeling you might have seen this stuff up close as well Essie ? "
I know it's well intended..I am too closely involved and affected by it for sure..and though I do believe in spreading awareness blah blah..I do think this thread is offensive in the way it was stated..make it fun...rhyme..no respect, childishly ignorant to reality[/quote]
Miki
I can only hopefully assume the kid didn't mean it literally that way. You know... the good intentions, foot in the mouth, blah blah thing ? It isn't like I didn't do it when I was younger. The alternative ? It isn't offensive to me. It is a frightening indicator of our future. I opt for hope Hun, always hope. lol
" The Little girl, and I can only assume she is a very young girl said some stupid things when she started that comp Essie. But... seeing this shit disease up close , and personal, I would rather someone ignorantly try to help, even if it nothing more than getting the fucking word out that this crap still exist in droves, than someone intelligently stand on the side lines.
Why do I have an odd feeling you might have seen this stuff up close as well Essie ? "
I know it's well intended..I am too closely involved and affected by it for sure..and though I do believe in spreading awareness blah blah..I do think this thread is offensive in the way it was stated..make it fun...rhyme..no respect, childishly ignorant to reality
[/quote] Miki
I can only hopefully assume the kid didn't mean it literally that way. You know... the good intentions, foot in the mouth, blah blah thing ? It isn't like I didn't do it when I was younger. The alternative ? It isn't offensive to me. It is a frightening indicator of our future. I opt for hope Hun, always hope. lol
Anonymous
Yeah, I take thing quite literally and this is a sensitive one to do foot in mouth on..but, I'll chill..I'm sure you're right 
thank's
thank's
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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Jeeeesh... If I had more money, instead of the pittance I can afford to give to the charities I do, I would haul my ass over there. I used to mule AZT in the 80s to AIDS patients. And now I read some of the crap the pharmaceutical companies do in Africa, and just wanna puke most times. Essie what can Americans actually DO ! Besides just throw friggin money at the problem ?
Jeeeesh... If I had more money, instead of the pittance I can afford to give to the charities I do, I would haul my ass over there. I used to mule AZT in the 80s to AIDS patients. And now I read some of the crap the pharmaceutical companies do in Africa, and just wanna puke most times. Essie what can Americans actually DO ! Besides just throw friggin money at the problem ?
Anonymous
"Spades"
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5005/5258046506_fca9216918_z.jpg
Like a rabbit,
he was everywhere,
from a
Jack to a Queen,
he played
the game so well,
buried
his ace
in every hole.
Short or fat,
tall or skinny,
it didn't matter,
he just wanted
to be held,
lived his life
on a
broken
merry-go-round.
He never
made a sound
when he got
the diagnosis,
not thrombosis
or trichinosis
it was
full-blown aids.
He got
paid handsomely
for his social flare.
And, who really cares
to be found
lying in bed,
swallowing
dozens of pills
to ease the pain
of hundreds of thrills.
Now, he's nowhere
to be found,
just
drowning
in spades,
sadly
all alone.
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5005/5258046506_fca9216918_z.jpg
Like a rabbit,
he was everywhere,
from a
Jack to a Queen,
he played
the game so well,
buried
his ace
in every hole.
Short or fat,
tall or skinny,
it didn't matter,
he just wanted
to be held,
lived his life
on a
broken
merry-go-round.
He never
made a sound
when he got
the diagnosis,
not thrombosis
or trichinosis
it was
full-blown aids.
He got
paid handsomely
for his social flare.
And, who really cares
to be found
lying in bed,
swallowing
dozens of pills
to ease the pain
of hundreds of thrills.
Now, he's nowhere
to be found,
just
drowning
in spades,
sadly
all alone.
