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plain old me
some people don't get my need for an alter ego
I understand this confusion
if my voice were consistently one way or another
my alter wouldn't be needed
as it is my bipolar has me flipping switches
between dark, light and all things beautiful
then there is my drug issue
I just came out honestly on my Crimsin pages
at first, I wanted it hidden
until the Mistress wisely made it a rule
all alter egos must be listed on our profile page
I almost deleted this account then
but I didn't because I feel freer here
not too many people read this account
I can post the poems I want to
without feelings of rejection if no one likes them
I wish I could say I don't feel bad if a poem doesn't take
but I do because I put my heart/soul into them
here I can write my flower poems
and no one is disappointed I didn't go dark
I can just be plain old me
perhaps with talent
perhaps not
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Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:28pm
I like your flower poems. I like to get to know people for all they are. That's what I try to show of myself too. Sometimes I post something odd and suddenly different people show up liking it. I find that interesting and enriching. Most people want to be accepted for all they are and it takes guts to show it. I see some people hiding behind artificial characters here in the forum. They don't want to be vulnerable. They are cowards. After a while I get bored with their bad ass shit. It's not real. Everybody can put on a mask and strut around being cool. Fuck that....keep showing yourself....and if people don't like it, they probably don't like themselves either.
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:34pm
thank you dearest Angel for loving my flower poems they really are the best part of me reaching for the sun in a sometimes dark place... I deeply appreciate you sharing your own diversity in writing style what I notice about your's is there is an underlying quality that you are a person of strength and beauty... I was afraid after awhile to say how I really felt as Crim because I got stitched into portraying only the darkness after a time... don't get me wrong that's there always should I tap into it I'm just now learning how not to tap into it as it's draining... not just to me but to others... if it comes to the surface I now have to wisely weigh whether I will write about it releasing it or not...
sigh i'm rambling...
I love what you said about being myself :)
love me
sigh i'm rambling...
I love what you said about being myself :)
love me
Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:41pm
if it comes to the surface I now have to wisely weigh whether I will write about it releasing it or not...
Sorry hijacking a reply here xD
One should write it out always
Or at least be comfortable knowing one can
People will see
They either comment or leave it be without
But tge important thing being is tgat you have an avenue of being able to release the pressure of bipolar by doing so
That's just my humble thoughts on it 😚😚
Sorry hijacking a reply here xD
One should write it out always
Or at least be comfortable knowing one can
People will see
They either comment or leave it be without
But tge important thing being is tgat you have an avenue of being able to release the pressure of bipolar by doing so
That's just my humble thoughts on it 😚😚
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:47pm
I second that Lookaway.... I write dark stuff too as it comes up. It's all about being in the moment and about self acceptance, versus fake self image or having to please a certain audience.
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:50pm
thank you beautiful Rose for your wise thought on this yes an outlet for my bipolar I believe you are right in this... I just worry I scare people off with the knowledge of how crazy my mood swings can be even in the space of an hour...
but I agree bottled up is not good either...
I appreciate your wisdom...
love me
but I agree bottled up is not good either...
I appreciate your wisdom...
love me
Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:51pm
Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:52pm
thank you beautiful Angel you give me courage not to hide this side of me no matter how ugly she is...
love me
love me
Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:57pm
I just worry I scare people off with the knowledge of how crazy my mood swings can be even in the space of an hour...
I'd doubt if they loved you (your writes) that mood swings can change how they feel
Your brave caring and unselfish
Be happy with that thought
You'll succeed I'm sure of it
I'd doubt if they loved you (your writes) that mood swings can change how they feel
Your brave caring and unselfish
Be happy with that thought
You'll succeed I'm sure of it
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 5:05pm
thank you beautiful Rose you moved me deeply with the love you've shown me :)
love me
love me
Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 5:11pm
Be brave when the time comes
to shine
I doubt very much you'll be unsupported
In your endeavours
to shine
I doubt very much you'll be unsupported
In your endeavours
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 5:27pm
I will be brave thank you beautiful Rose for the uplifting thoughts :)
love me
love me
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:36pm
aw thank you most graciously dearest Bender for such a beautiful and heart warming comment and such wise way to see things...
love Raven aka Crimsin
love Raven aka Crimsin
Re. plain old me
Anonymous
6th Aug 2018 3:35pm
Just be you, lovely Raven. You are a beautiful being...flowers, drugs or darkness...makes no difference. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:38pm
thank you beautiful Willow i'm learning to love all sides of me at present while you've been showing all my sides love for some time now...
I love you for that and many other reasons...
love me
I love you for that and many other reasons...
love me
Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:37pm
Beautiful write
And yes many, for various reasons medical or other have various accounts on here
Can't say I've ever thought of it as a bad thing
And why not have many alts*
It's something I've realised from day one that it's just as it is
Didn't get it at first but it's no issue for me
I did myself have one or two other places on here but let them fall dusty and anyway lol I can't remember their passwords so I live as looka in my world of one
And yes many, for various reasons medical or other have various accounts on here
Can't say I've ever thought of it as a bad thing
And why not have many alts*
It's something I've realised from day one that it's just as it is
Didn't get it at first but it's no issue for me
I did myself have one or two other places on here but let them fall dusty and anyway lol I can't remember their passwords so I live as looka in my world of one
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Re: Re. plain old me
6th Aug 2018 3:47pm
thank you beautiful Rose for understanding there may come a day when I let this one go for now this part of me has things to say I'm hesitant as posting under Crim... so I feel freer here...
I'm glad too because you and I spent years not knowing of each other's poetry and now we do and I'm blessed with your sweet seduction...
love me
I'm glad too because you and I spent years not knowing of each other's poetry and now we do and I'm blessed with your sweet seduction...
love me
Re. plain old me
An old Chinese proverb, I think, ' the most beautiful flower blooms in adversity ', that saying has helped me so much, just wanted to share it, your metaphor made me think of it :)
A lotus growing in a brackish swamp, not so different from this world..
I like the wisdom of this piece..
A lotus growing in a brackish swamp, not so different from this world..
I like the wisdom of this piece..
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Re: Re. plain old me
7th Aug 2018 2:08am
thank you graciously beautiful PR for your wise and lovely comment... you know you inspired me to write I can't post it yet just wanted you to know I will be posting it under my Crim name later it's called she who dances with the stars...
love Raven aka Crim
love Raven aka Crim
Re. plain old me
7th Aug 2018 3:22am
Brenda.. you put your soul into all your ink.. whether it be Crimsin, or Raven.. dark or light.. i've thought of writing under an alias.. i was just to lazy, again you amaze me.. i've told you many times, i dig your light inks.. and we went as dark as could be in our "Serial Killers" series.. it was too much for both of us, we found the line in the sand.. thank you for being brave enough to travel that road.. i've learned so much from you, and continue to learn.. you're special my sister, and to me you reign as queen.. accept the crown, you deserve.. you've changed life's.. love you, forever.. always your brother..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. plain old me
7th Aug 2018 3:26am
thank you graciously my brother Dave yes we journeyed that road together and it was meant to be it couldn't be done with any other... I cherish each day of this journey with you Dave you've really evolved as a writer but always with power...
I love you Dave you honor me greatly...
love Brenda
I love you Dave you honor me greatly...
love Brenda