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Story of her: A Light Revelation to Our Souls

I was told she is strong and fine, while I can hear the hospital bed beep rate increasing. Her mom right outside the emergency room. She kept saying, "They say she could pass away any day." I couldn't look into her eyes as they were gleaming with her hand tightly grasping the hospital sheets and her lips kissing pursed. You can tell she was in pain. Praying so hard to the sky for the life of her daughter to be saved. Our hearts are soaked; tears are running down my fiancé's mom's cheeks. The message we read from the doctor's actions is unbearable. Foes blow confetti, folks pretend to be caring. It is the weeping, mourning, and gnashing of teeth!

But when the doctor said that she'd made it, you could see our eyes gleam with a moment of shock. That's when we knew how much we loved this daughter of her. With the utmost gratitude dedicated to the skies, thanking the wisdom we acquired from the circle of life, we thank the heavens for enabling our understanding to the wheel of fortune where life is in demand to stop and learn. We thank heaven for the revelations we experienced in the midst of our lives.
Written by congress (Mareka Congress)
Published | Edited 12th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Thank you for supporting your daughter and I's relationship, Mama... - Me and Her
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