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Waves are crashing
like my tears
but these waves
wont disappear
im giving up
Im drowning now
Can you please help me up
can you please
help me out?
I just wanna
get back
to the surface
I just wanna
for once
not feel worthless
I just wanna feel alive
I just wanna
not die
I just wanna
swim through the water
I just wanna
not
be bait for a slaughter
can you please,help me out
I shouldnt have to
scream or shout
JUST.LISTEN
TO ME
HELP ME
FIND
MY OWN
REMEDY
like my tears
but these waves
wont disappear
im giving up
Im drowning now
Can you please help me up
can you please
help me out?
I just wanna
get back
to the surface
I just wanna
for once
not feel worthless
I just wanna feel alive
I just wanna
not die
I just wanna
swim through the water
I just wanna
not
be bait for a slaughter
can you please,help me out
I shouldnt have to
scream or shout
JUST.LISTEN
TO ME
HELP ME
FIND
MY OWN
REMEDY
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