Poems About Hypocrisy Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about hypocrisy seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 8:53am
4th Oct 2024 8:53am
What Lonely, Hopeless Alphas Don't Understand
Imagine this: you're living alone, you begin to think of companionship and simply not being alone. Your goal is to be honest about who you are and to be accepted for the shortcomings you are working towards fixing. So, alone you stay, making a space you can love so you may have one to learn how to love yourself, and you learn. Little by little, you learn how to make yourself feel secure and safe. You do so by being financially responsible enough to live a life that gives you freedom to do what you want. Your bills aren't just manageable, they're almost nonexistent with no credit card balances...
#hypocrisy
#men
#prose
#women
#dating
102 reads
3 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 9:44pm
27th Sep 2024 9:44pm
Pain pleasure semi circle
Pain pleasure semi circle
You give me pain
You give me pleasure
Wrapped in time release
Pain in everyday
Pleasure just beyond your reach
Cocooning in between
You give me pain
I give my pain for your pleasure
Cannot come up empty in my being
I give you pleasure
Dopamine in a capsule
I’m Phoenix spreading his wings
Pup can’t please his master
Treat in my palm
He responds like I imagine
Map of chemistry
Wrapped in time release
Injection...
You give me pain
You give me pleasure
Wrapped in time release
Pain in everyday
Pleasure just beyond your reach
Cocooning in between
You give me pain
I give my pain for your pleasure
Cannot come up empty in my being
I give you pleasure
Dopamine in a capsule
I’m Phoenix spreading his wings
Pup can’t please his master
Treat in my palm
He responds like I imagine
Map of chemistry
Wrapped in time release
Injection...
#addiction
#hypocrisy
#shame
71 reads
0 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 6:23am
14th Sep 2024 6:23am
Your Own Worst Enemy
All you ever did was lie
You lied when you said you would change
And so did I
I don't deny my role in this
I did enough to mess us up
But I always stayed consistent
Didn't I
When i blew up our lives
And offered you everything
Asking for nothing
You ask for money
For the same freedom
And you flew to missouri
Got on your knees
Lying to me some more
Lying to yourself
Evermore
For four years
You lied to me
Lied to you
And what's worse
You offered forgiveness
A family ...
You lied when you said you would change
And so did I
I don't deny my role in this
I did enough to mess us up
But I always stayed consistent
Didn't I
When i blew up our lives
And offered you everything
Asking for nothing
You ask for money
For the same freedom
And you flew to missouri
Got on your knees
Lying to me some more
Lying to yourself
Evermore
For four years
You lied to me
Lied to you
And what's worse
You offered forgiveness
A family ...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#hypocrisy #ignorance
#hypocrisy #ignorance
117 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 4:04pm
6th Sep 2024 4:04pm
WIDE SCREEN LIFE STYLE
It's the vice. The jobs; The car extension of the dick;
Paris model clothes; Duplex with garage;
Social networks, Cell Phones;
Television with movie screen!?!?!?
You show yourself!
Show you! Shows the new TV with special effects
guaranteed when you tell them the price you paid;
The car you use to go to Mommy's
more turning her from the sad;
The Hyper - Mega - Recent Sound System
with which you wake up the neighbors on Sunday morning
with any Macarena or Lipa Doja shitty shit!
You impose your image!
You...
Paris model clothes; Duplex with garage;
Social networks, Cell Phones;
Television with movie screen!?!?!?
You show yourself!
Show you! Shows the new TV with special effects
guaranteed when you tell them the price you paid;
The car you use to go to Mommy's
more turning her from the sad;
The Hyper - Mega - Recent Sound System
with which you wake up the neighbors on Sunday morning
with any Macarena or Lipa Doja shitty shit!
You impose your image!
You...
#death
#greed
#hypocrisy
#lies
#manipulation
87 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Sep 2024 4:03am
6th Sep 2024 4:03am
gossiping birds
amused shadows claw
do you stand in judgment of me?
greetings everyone but let's roll the verse first
and understand we don't need the formality
I'm sure we've already met
shallow without depth
I would love to jump in
but your pool of knowledge is cold
not inviting at all
gossip little back birds
cluck, cluck
there's not much to talk about
echoing in silence
the noise the children of scorn make
amazes them, I would encourage you
but you're already patting each other on the back
slips the...
do you stand in judgment of me?
greetings everyone but let's roll the verse first
and understand we don't need the formality
I'm sure we've already met
shallow without depth
I would love to jump in
but your pool of knowledge is cold
not inviting at all
gossip little back birds
cluck, cluck
there's not much to talk about
echoing in silence
the noise the children of scorn make
amazes them, I would encourage you
but you're already patting each other on the back
slips the...
#dark
#hypocrisy
157 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 10:54am
5th Sep 2024 10:54am
Lying over the truth
I have lied through life
I've been caught numerous times
My life's a facade
I've been caught numerous times
My life's a facade
#hypocrisy
#lies
#senryu
87 reads
15 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
4th Sep 2024 2:04am
4th Sep 2024 2:04am
Dinner with the devil
The devil came, to dinner one night.
He was a man, all dressed in white.
Light in manner, confessed a sinner.
Proved good manners, all through dinner.
Soon the devil, showed up often.
So thought that, I could help him.
He seemed to share, my every thought.
He filled up all, the empty spots.
To look the devil straight, you see.
A man that's vulnerable, I his need.
And since my thoughts, are always good.
I'd protect him, as I should.
Then the day, he showed late.
Dinner cold, made...
He was a man, all dressed in white.
Light in manner, confessed a sinner.
Proved good manners, all through dinner.
Soon the devil, showed up often.
So thought that, I could help him.
He seemed to share, my every thought.
He filled up all, the empty spots.
To look the devil straight, you see.
A man that's vulnerable, I his need.
And since my thoughts, are always good.
I'd protect him, as I should.
Then the day, he showed late.
Dinner cold, made...
#hypocrisy
#strength
#tolerance #wisdom
#tolerance #wisdom
110 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 8:47pm
3rd Sep 2024 8:47pm
Cutthroats & Cutlery
When he found out how things really were between men & women
He was shocked how cutthroat both sexes were to one another
It was a drag to find out that everybody knew all the same shit and everyone played it off like it was nothing
All the things that go unsaid
They get shoved into your guts like cutlery
All the bullshit sex etiquette
It's like a miniature cold war
What a bunch of lies & ego trips
That's why all these people were so freaked out about each other
It's one big club
The look away & laugh club
A revelation the...
He was shocked how cutthroat both sexes were to one another
It was a drag to find out that everybody knew all the same shit and everyone played it off like it was nothing
All the things that go unsaid
They get shoved into your guts like cutlery
All the bullshit sex etiquette
It's like a miniature cold war
What a bunch of lies & ego trips
That's why all these people were so freaked out about each other
It's one big club
The look away & laugh club
A revelation the...
#anger
#conflict
#deception
#hypocrisy
#lies
83 reads
3 Comments
UbiquitousVoid
Poem Published
1st Sep 2024 10:27am
1st Sep 2024 10:27am
GRAIL
Tragedy unspoken
By chlororescent eyes
The storm I'd betokened
That ripped through the disguise
A brown noise undulates
The dirge of her demise
Her shame absquatulates
'Neath vivaciousness, hides
In memory, vagrant
Chased by tenebrous tides
And presently, hated
By the mouths you fed lies
Warped glass, fractal plane
Loathe belied by lust
Must devour the remains
From these hands, again
The time had arrived
Yet in fantasy, denied
On flesh ecstasy, rides
Emptied grail, mine
By chlororescent eyes
The storm I'd betokened
That ripped through the disguise
A brown noise undulates
The dirge of her demise
Her shame absquatulates
'Neath vivaciousness, hides
In memory, vagrant
Chased by tenebrous tides
And presently, hated
By the mouths you fed lies
Warped glass, fractal plane
Loathe belied by lust
Must devour the remains
From these hands, again
The time had arrived
Yet in fantasy, denied
On flesh ecstasy, rides
Emptied grail, mine
#hypocrisy
#sex
#temptation
164 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 12:37pm
14th Aug 2024 12:37pm
The 700 Club
Power
Lies
Hatred
Prejudice
Thief
Biased
Manipulator
Sectarianism
Bigotry
Corruption
Hypocrite
Billy Graham
Pat Robertson
Oral Roberts
Jimmy Swaggart
Jimmy & Tammy Faye Bakker
Jerry Falwell
Lies
Hatred
Prejudice
Thief
Biased
Manipulator
Sectarianism
Bigotry
Corruption
Hypocrite
Billy Graham
Pat Robertson
Oral Roberts
Jimmy Swaggart
Jimmy & Tammy Faye Bakker
Jerry Falwell
#Christian
#deception
#hypocrisy
#lies
#corruption
105 reads
10 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
10th Aug 2024 3:16pm
10th Aug 2024 3:16pm
'00s
Being 12 years old
and hooked on crap
non-culture from the States,
your High School Musicals
and 90210s,
OCs, boy bands, teen flicks.
My brother tells me how
these products lied to us,
sold us the lie, across the pond,
that adolescence was
a wonderland of learning how to be.
As if they ever cared for truth.
And now we know that even they,
the dream children of Hollywood,
were being touched and raped
and cast into the sludge.
The lie itself did not even
support its own servants.
The...
and hooked on crap
non-culture from the States,
your High School Musicals
and 90210s,
OCs, boy bands, teen flicks.
My brother tells me how
these products lied to us,
sold us the lie, across the pond,
that adolescence was
a wonderland of learning how to be.
As if they ever cared for truth.
And now we know that even they,
the dream children of Hollywood,
were being touched and raped
and cast into the sludge.
The lie itself did not even
support its own servants.
The...
#childhood
#hypocrisy
#PopCulture #technology
#PopCulture #technology
93 reads
4 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
9th Aug 2024 4:22am
9th Aug 2024 4:22am
Truth Serum
How real can you be with a person bullshit aside
Put my thoughts in your head like fuck all pride
Really real talking facts not censored caring of perception
Offensive speaking truth with no redacted reflection
The world’s full of dumb fucks in howling applaud like trained seals
Passionate mesmerized in stupidity overzealous who can’t keep it real
Let alone common sense or opinion to decipher deceptive holes in life
As if trapdoors in a world of unknowns is labeled in black and white
Clenched I look out at crowds livid in savage bottled disgust ...
Put my thoughts in your head like fuck all pride
Really real talking facts not censored caring of perception
Offensive speaking truth with no redacted reflection
The world’s full of dumb fucks in howling applaud like trained seals
Passionate mesmerized in stupidity overzealous who can’t keep it real
Let alone common sense or opinion to decipher deceptive holes in life
As if trapdoors in a world of unknowns is labeled in black and white
Clenched I look out at crowds livid in savage bottled disgust ...
#dystopian
#hypocrisy
#anger
#CallToAction
#politics
249 reads
5 Comments
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