Poems About Frustration Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about frustration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 5:15am
11th Apr 2025 5:15am
Music and Politics
Do you remember the days
When you heard the radio play
We are the world
And “One” on Bono’s tour
We just wanna have fun
Was chased by I wanna dance with somebody
Are those days done
Hello anybody!
A Smooth Criminal was played all-day
Now we have one in the white house
Hip hip hooray
Yea quiet like a church mouse
I remember when the wall came down
The shock and awe of it all
I remember when another house came down
It was crazy. We knew who started that ball
There was a singer named George...
When you heard the radio play
We are the world
And “One” on Bono’s tour
We just wanna have fun
Was chased by I wanna dance with somebody
Are those days done
Hello anybody!
A Smooth Criminal was played all-day
Now we have one in the white house
Hip hip hooray
Yea quiet like a church mouse
I remember when the wall came down
The shock and awe of it all
I remember when another house came down
It was crazy. We knew who started that ball
There was a singer named George...
#anxiety
#fear
#frustration #motivational
#frustration #motivational
91 reads
16 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 11:22pm
10th Apr 2025 11:22pm
Why are we not willing
You know that it's hard enough to find real love and respect, for the betterment of life. YET why do we constantly have to play the blame game as grown men's and women's, but yet here we are in these days and times. For what happened to when we use to communicate, with each other on a positive level to articulate what we have to say to each other. But instead they gotta get on some podcast to shout and scream their anger talking about the other person like a dog. yet it's two sides to a story telling but yet they forget to mention the truth. What and why you women's and men's chose to...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#confusion
#frustration
53 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 10:58am
5th Apr 2025 10:58am
Power Of Hate
Hate is certainly a strong emotion.
It doesn't take much effort,but devotion.
It's like you are going through the motions.
And a black mist blinds you.
It doesn't let you think straight.
And it's easy for it to find you.
Maybe it's like a dark cloud in the sky.
That can spread,no matter how or why.
Maybe a black mask,facade.
To something so much deeper.
Maybe it's our demons.
Dark instead of covered in glitter.
The taste of hate is strong and bitter.
It can be hard to shake it off.
It feels like...
It doesn't take much effort,but devotion.
It's like you are going through the motions.
And a black mist blinds you.
It doesn't let you think straight.
And it's easy for it to find you.
Maybe it's like a dark cloud in the sky.
That can spread,no matter how or why.
Maybe a black mask,facade.
To something so much deeper.
Maybe it's our demons.
Dark instead of covered in glitter.
The taste of hate is strong and bitter.
It can be hard to shake it off.
It feels like...
#anger
#dark
#frustration #hate
#frustration #hate
51 reads
1 Comment
Drifting
Poem Published
5th Apr 2025 4:55am
5th Apr 2025 4:55am
Figure It Out
I hope one day you finally discover your worth and stop fucking with these losers.
Your dating life is like watching the worlds longest death by a thousand cuts suicide note play itself out in live action and it's the saddest goddamn play I've ever seen.
Once you figure out who the fuck you are, you'll find out who I wrote this for.
Your dating life is like watching the worlds longest death by a thousand cuts suicide note play itself out in live action and it's the saddest goddamn play I've ever seen.
Once you figure out who the fuck you are, you'll find out who I wrote this for.
#disappointment
#frustration
62 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 10:27am
1st Apr 2025 10:27am
Stay Strong & Focused
It's so good to hear you sounding so good and happy, man that's awesome!
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You have to pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
Stay strong
Stay focused
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You have to pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
Stay strong
Stay focused
#frustration
#LifeStruggles
#myself
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfWorth
88 reads
8 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 12:42pm
31st Mar 2025 12:42pm
Burden
I just want freedom
From a place on the finest of lines
The scenario of irrational explanations
For every fucked up situation
Since I was born, these memories significantly
Impacted me tremendously
My peers have seemed to “unintentionally” mess with me mentally
But why am I I the only one who can see?
From a place on the finest of lines
The scenario of irrational explanations
For every fucked up situation
Since I was born, these memories significantly
Impacted me tremendously
My peers have seemed to “unintentionally” mess with me mentally
But why am I I the only one who can see?
#emotions
#frustration
#LifeStruggles #MovingOn
#LifeStruggles #MovingOn
53 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 1:03pm
28th Mar 2025 1:03pm
Don't take knowone for granted
It's true what the elders say that we should never take nothing for granted, as this is life in real life time. For sure do you know for sure that tomorrow, isn't a promise 🤨 for it's a blessing in the form of a gift, to have and behold of a precious kind of life, as well as a beautiful blessing sometimes as a disguise. For sure it's never good to be taken for granted, just like love and happiness of a kindness of a beautiful heart. ❤️ But yet there are those who are creatures of habits, that just don't want to do right for they prefer to do wrong, 😔 to someone...
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#emptiness
#frustration
#sadness
73 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 11:30pm
27th Mar 2025 11:30pm
I just wanna live
As I am a firm believer that I want to live my life, as I continue to stand and fight for this precious life, that I love and want for my wife and family and friends, to be able to live. For what I can relate to the most is when I thought about seeing myself, as I was feeling that I wasn't going to make it to see another day. But yet God Almighty insured me it's going to be alright, even with the process of dealing with different stages of cancers that took control over my life. For sure let's dig deeper than deep into my life, let's begin with the facts of what I have and had to learn to...
#anger
#emotions
#fear
#frustration
#gratitude
71 reads
4 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 9:53pm
26th Mar 2025 9:53pm
Closing Time
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xGytDsqkQY8
Last drinks shouts the tender
drink em up
it's time to be out
I need to get home
so sip the last of your beer
slam down the last shots
head toward the outside
the chill of the night
fought off by the incoherence of
alcohols numb
the wisps of the smoke machine swirls
and clings like sad fog
to the crusted carpets
where booze and blood
bile and tears have stained my memories
with exquisite times and the haunted agony
of a thousand-thousand poets ...
Last drinks shouts the tender
drink em up
it's time to be out
I need to get home
so sip the last of your beer
slam down the last shots
head toward the outside
the chill of the night
fought off by the incoherence of
alcohols numb
the wisps of the smoke machine swirls
and clings like sad fog
to the crusted carpets
where booze and blood
bile and tears have stained my memories
with exquisite times and the haunted agony
of a thousand-thousand poets ...
#bittersweet
#frustration
#heartbroken
145 reads
3 Comments
michaelslove2
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 6:09am
26th Mar 2025 6:09am
Calling About Tuesday
Calling About Tuesday
I hung up on him twice
but he kept right on calling
all through the night till the sun
began to rise.
'Rrrring Rrrring Rrrring Rrring!'
“Won't you please leave me alone!”
'Rrrring Rrrring Rrrring Rrrring!'
From the telephone.
I unplugged the phone from the wall.
Still it would ring!
I threw it against the wall
shattering the thing!
I went out for a walk to relax, clear my mind.
The park near my home always my place
to get away from it all for a while.
...
I hung up on him twice
but he kept right on calling
all through the night till the sun
began to rise.
'Rrrring Rrrring Rrrring Rrring!'
“Won't you please leave me alone!”
'Rrrring Rrrring Rrrring Rrrring!'
From the telephone.
I unplugged the phone from the wall.
Still it would ring!
I threw it against the wall
shattering the thing!
I went out for a walk to relax, clear my mind.
The park near my home always my place
to get away from it all for a while.
...
#anxiety
#dark
#fear
#frustration
#horror
61 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2025 3:13pm
22nd Mar 2025 3:13pm
Real Talk
Ain't nobody interested,
In that petty shit,
You call friendship.
I just want some chips and dip.
Some balls and dick,
And Netflix.
Let me guess,
You're dyslexic?
Stupid bitch.
Hmpf!
In that petty shit,
You call friendship.
I just want some chips and dip.
Some balls and dick,
And Netflix.
Let me guess,
You're dyslexic?
Stupid bitch.
Hmpf!
#anger
#CallToAction
#frustration #honesty
#frustration #honesty
92 reads
4 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 3:46am
21st Mar 2025 3:46am
A Tale As Old As f**king
I’ve brought my own table
as a pariah of deception and false light
I should shoulder my burdens alone
scraping worn out shoes on
melting asphalt
because there’s nothing more pathetic than a
down-bad-wannabe-troubadour
selling stolen kisses and broken promises
some nights the walls creep toward me
solemn crumbling gyprock bemoaning their lot
to hold it all up
while the bed is an iced-tundra of loneliness
so I wake before the dawn
saddle my burdens in a beat up truck
watch...
as a pariah of deception and false light
I should shoulder my burdens alone
scraping worn out shoes on
melting asphalt
because there’s nothing more pathetic than a
down-bad-wannabe-troubadour
selling stolen kisses and broken promises
some nights the walls creep toward me
solemn crumbling gyprock bemoaning their lot
to hold it all up
while the bed is an iced-tundra of loneliness
so I wake before the dawn
saddle my burdens in a beat up truck
watch...
#dark
#frustration
#heartbroken
181 reads
3 Comments
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