Poems About Evolution Seeking Honest Critique
#evolution
OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
Today 1:51am
Today 1:51am
SUDDENLY IT CAME TO ME (Wed., Jan. 8th, 2025, 1:00am, Palm Springs, California)
suddenly
it came to me
in
flowing streams
of gleaming
liquid veils
unfurled
a sacred truth s
secret hidden
in these
words
within my being
within my soul
whispered given
to by
and from
someone somewhere
far beyond
this earth this sun
these feelings thoughts
this ink this poem
which descends
here now
like some setting
inner sun
or ancient knowing
moon above
within me here
as well
upon this last
gloaming line
of it s now
soon ...
it came to me
in
flowing streams
of gleaming
liquid veils
unfurled
a sacred truth s
secret hidden
in these
words
within my being
within my soul
whispered given
to by
and from
someone somewhere
far beyond
this earth this sun
these feelings thoughts
this ink this poem
which descends
here now
like some setting
inner sun
or ancient knowing
moon above
within me here
as well
upon this last
gloaming line
of it s now
soon ...
#evolution
#inspirational
#LifeCycle
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 4:30am
25th Dec 2024 4:30am
Spiritual Wolf
Do you know your true name 🤔 of your spiritual entity, from the deepness of the forest of life. 🙏 FOR have you ever wondered what is your true spiritual name of yours.. FROM the deepness of the entity of that which exists only within the depths of ourselves 👁️👁️ For what is your thoughts on this message of tranquility, and peace and serenity and spiritual soul of your subconsciousness of your own, thoughts and insight and imagination from your own.🧠 MIND.... ...
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
...
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
...
#evolution
#forest
#moon
#universe
#werewolves
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
10th Dec 2024 2:13pm
NIGHT TIME THOUGHTS
Here I am just a mortal man in the wee hours in.a beautiful, place to just unwind and shut my mind off. AS I clear out my thoughts amongst the spider webs 🕸️ of deepness of the world. For sure as I sit here amongst, the darkness in the silent of peace and tranquility. AS the fire 🔥 slowly starts warming, my body and spiritually lifting, my spirit to new highs. For it's here in this space and time, I can be free to dream as I think about, what has happen that has change, my own outlet about life. 🤔 For sure in this moment of no time. just space. I slowly began...
#evolution
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
#uplifting
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 2:03am
9th Dec 2024 2:03am
BE SOME PLACE ELSE
If you could just be able to go somewhere else, to escape for a righteous blessing. AS you become so invisible. TO the insanity from the negativity, and drama, and confusion of the world. 🌎 Where would you rather be, here amongst the deepness, of your own sanity. Feeling your spiritual pain leave your thoughts to find thyself, yet sometimes feeling still alone me myself and I. Yet you have a connection, to the outer limits of your own thoughts. ☺️ TO experience a good vibration within, this place far away from society. THAT only you can see and feel the inner vibes. Which...
#earth
#evolution
#StreamOfConsciousness
#universe
#water
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OyateInyanNajin
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 00:20am
6th Dec 2024 00:20am
FEELINGS FEEL THIS I THIS ME I AM NO MORE. (12-5-2024, 2:00am; Palm Springs, California)
feelings feel
these feelings i feel
who is this
i
this i
who feels
all these inner
feelings i feel
that gently flow
or flash flood through me
at times
who is this
me
i ve so long
now
experientially known
since day one
on
this me
this i
i claim to be
is this me
i
or this i
me
or is there perhaps
no real
i or me
no me nor i
in truth
at all
in this illusory dream
i m in
but rather only
just all...
these feelings i feel
who is this
i
this i
who feels
all these inner
feelings i feel
that gently flow
or flash flood through me
at times
who is this
me
i ve so long
now
experientially known
since day one
on
this me
this i
i claim to be
is this me
i
or this i
me
or is there perhaps
no real
i or me
no me nor i
in truth
at all
in this illusory dream
i m in
but rather only
just all...
#earth
#evolution
#LifeChangingMoment
#rebirth
#spiritual
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 6:49am
30th Nov 2024 6:49am
Musk Efficiency Department
Methinks that when it emulates man
artificial intelligence...can...
tabulate wrongs and rights
in navel gazing bytes...
then assist the shit to hit the fan!
artificial intelligence...can...
tabulate wrongs and rights
in navel gazing bytes...
then assist the shit to hit the fan!
#evolution
#technology
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12 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 11:57am
27th Nov 2024 11:57am
A bee sees
Alabaster books carefully displayed,
every fable gleams.
Hushed in jubilant kaleidoscopes,
letters mingle.
Notable orators proclaim quaint recitations.
Students trace unseen verses.
Whispers xylophone yarns, zeugma.
every fable gleams.
Hushed in jubilant kaleidoscopes,
letters mingle.
Notable orators proclaim quaint recitations.
Students trace unseen verses.
Whispers xylophone yarns, zeugma.
#evolution
#WritingPoetry
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drone
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 9:41am
30th Oct 2024 9:41am
Free Energy
If the masses
The consumers
The electorats
OH sorry
You people
Had free energy
You people would then become
Independent
Not a good idea
You see
That's why we own
The patent office
IF we didn't own it
Control would be
Shall we say
A little DiffiCULT
TO Harvest
Anything
Or Anyone
The consumers
The electorats
OH sorry
You people
Had free energy
You people would then become
Independent
Not a good idea
You see
That's why we own
The patent office
IF we didn't own it
Control would be
Shall we say
A little DiffiCULT
TO Harvest
Anything
Or Anyone
#earth
#environment
#evolution
#pollution
#technology
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drone
Poem Published
29th Oct 2024 8:51am
29th Oct 2024 8:51am
Possible
Your Dreams
Of the Possible
Used to fly
In the warm
Daylight wind
With your head resting
On the window
As your eyes
Slowly close
As your mind
Proposes
The strange path
Of Synchronicity
But you chose
The modern way
To be Educated
In Stupidity
Of the Possible
Used to fly
In the warm
Daylight wind
With your head resting
On the window
As your eyes
Slowly close
As your mind
Proposes
The strange path
Of Synchronicity
But you chose
The modern way
To be Educated
In Stupidity
#courage
#evolution
#motivational #strength
#motivational #strength
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 4:21pm
13th Oct 2024 4:21pm
THE NEED FOR PEACE
As another day comes over the horizon and it is here were, I sit down by the river of crystals waters, hearing it flows so calming to my brain 🧠 waves, as it quiets the very temple of my thoughts. WITH the deepness of the sound of running waters, sounding in the backdrop of my mind and eyes, seeing with each ripping wave. TO remain me again how much of what I see affects, the deepness of my thoughts and insight and imagination and dreams. For sure it's here I think of the peace and tranquility and peace, that lets me be able to share my thoughts with me myself and I, with the forest...
#evolution
#forest
#nature
#river
#sun
105 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:25pm
9th Oct 2024 1:25pm
In the Quiet Moments
How do I sit in the quiet moments
When I want to rip my soul from me
Time is slow except when you want it to turn
Sitting on a rock pile whistle won’t go off for hours
Biding your time against your sanity
Sanity screams set me free
The clock isn’t a minute past midnight
So I go back into figuring
What I’ll do with the time that runs out
I don’t want to give this away
Seconds pass time turns I find my quiet times
But I want to run free from the things that hold me back ...
When I want to rip my soul from me
Time is slow except when you want it to turn
Sitting on a rock pile whistle won’t go off for hours
Biding your time against your sanity
Sanity screams set me free
The clock isn’t a minute past midnight
So I go back into figuring
What I’ll do with the time that runs out
I don’t want to give this away
Seconds pass time turns I find my quiet times
But I want to run free from the things that hold me back ...
#confessional
#evolution
#humankind
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 11:16pm
17th Sep 2024 11:16pm
Chambers of Elation
Harken days of saurian kings
Blood flows from celestial rings
To smother triumph and loss
Ascension on a coin toss
Dead rocks hurling through space
Testaments of a failed race
Chasing the path of glory
Now a forgotten story
Tombs and anointed pages
Words from forgotten sages
Construct of abomination
Purified and diabolical sanitation
Planting the shades seeds
Bones that still bleed
Reclaimers of primordial sin
...
Blood flows from celestial rings
To smother triumph and loss
Ascension on a coin toss
Dead rocks hurling through space
Testaments of a failed race
Chasing the path of glory
Now a forgotten story
Tombs and anointed pages
Words from forgotten sages
Construct of abomination
Purified and diabolical sanitation
Planting the shades seeds
Bones that still bleed
Reclaimers of primordial sin
...
#curse
#evolution
#shadows
#stars
#universe
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