Poems About Life Struggles Seeking Honest Critique
#LifeStruggles
Poems about life struggles seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 12:45pm
Today 12:45pm
it's time to change
Here I am as I reflect upon my own life and where I've been and gone through in the last four years. 😔. For it's true that we sometimes pick up habits during the course of our lives. 😞 YET not thinking about the damages, that we do to our own body and soul and mind. 😲 Let's dive into the deepness, of the mind and spiritual soul of the truth, about what we have done 🤔 over time. 🤫 But yet it is necessary, to be able to be honest with thyself, for sure no matter what type of drugs, we took into our own body over time it will affect us, in the long term....
#addiction
#FeelingLost
#FeelingTrapped
#LifeStruggles
#suffering
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
30th Apr 2025 5:17am
30th Apr 2025 5:17am
Shadow Dancer
When your thoughts start to become dark 🌑 with thoughts of darkness, as your feelings and emotions start to change, in ways that you could never really imagine. For sure it's necessary to truly understand what is going on from within, as much as it will affect you more frequently than you think. 🤔 For sure it can really happen to anyone, who has bent up anger of just losing there sense to think, about there own actions which sometimes brings nothing but consequences. Sometimes it can be spiritual as it can be mentally and emotionally, and physically draining to the deepness of...
#emotional
#FeelingTrapped
#grief
#LifeStruggles
#suffering
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Apr 2025 3:15am
29th Apr 2025 3:15am
The best place to be
It's true that there will come a time ⌚ when somethings, will change in your life when you come across, the road of life filled with nothing else, just a road that has no end. For it's at that point in your life, you have to reevaluate your thoughts and prayers, with your true wants and needs of your, desires of a better life. For sure that is when the time, has come for you to understand that, everything must change from your past, as you look forward to seeing your true future dreams, leaving behind your past heading to the your ultimate DREAMS. For sure now that you are in an, place...
#despair
#FeelingTrapped
#grief
#LifeStruggles
#suffering
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Apr 2025 9:16pm
27th Apr 2025 9:16pm
When will there be peace
This world has become so unreal that it's gotten to the point, that nothing is what it is suppose to be, nothing more and nothing less but an illusion of nothing, but lies and false promises. Even the people's have become less concern about, the future of our children's that are involved in killings creating nonsense, and drama and confusion and madness and chaos. 😠 Some people's are protesting for their own country, waving their country flags, and burning the Americans flags, yet you are here in America schools and colleges, 😠protesting here not in there own country. This...
#dialogue
#grief
#LifeStruggles
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Apr 2025 2:26pm
26th Apr 2025 2:26pm
Within my thoughts I've seen
Here I am as I am with my own spiritual connection within thyself, feeling the closeness of my thoughts and the mere feelings, of the tranquility and peace and harmony. For sure as I continue to analyze, my own mind thoughts, of the world. 🌎 THAT to me that it is really necessary, to understand that it's even harder to focus, on what we witness of how much the world, has deeply fallen into the pit of pure energy of darkness. Guarded by the evil forces who are hell bent, on committing to poison the mind of so many women's and men's. For it's like they have to go against the world,...
#fear
#grief
#LifeStruggles
#sadness
#suffering
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Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
25th Apr 2025 11:11pm
25th Apr 2025 11:11pm
Restless
It's a familiar, and thus probably unsurprising combination of emotions:
restless boredom, unless thoroughly engaged in multiple absorbing projects
(preferably academic); resigned to settling for less, somehow;
knowing my worth, how well I work,
yet feeling that I deserve this.
And the inadequacy. Always, inadequacy.
But then, logically speaking,
why would I
feel superior
anyway?!
restless boredom, unless thoroughly engaged in multiple absorbing projects
(preferably academic); resigned to settling for less, somehow;
knowing my worth, how well I work,
yet feeling that I deserve this.
And the inadequacy. Always, inadequacy.
But then, logically speaking,
why would I
feel superior
anyway?!
#anxiety
#job
#LifeGoals #LifeStruggles
#LifeGoals #LifeStruggles
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InDreamz
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 7:08pm
22nd Apr 2025 7:08pm
inner demons
my inner demons incarcerated
in the prison of my mind;
i let them out on a parole
for they seemed tranquliized.
the only rule to follow
that they would roam in solitude
without in the company
of their other inmates-
be just mute
i thought i had tamed them
and a little freedom
was served them as a treat,
but the moment they were released
they ran like wild hogs
stamping and trampling
those...
in the prison of my mind;
i let them out on a parole
for they seemed tranquliized.
the only rule to follow
that they would roam in solitude
without in the company
of their other inmates-
be just mute
i thought i had tamed them
and a little freedom
was served them as a treat,
but the moment they were released
they ran like wild hogs
stamping and trampling
those...
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth #SelfReflection
#MentalHealth #SelfReflection
118 reads
14 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 5:56am
22nd Apr 2025 5:56am
Savage Daughter
There’s nothing like a parent’s pride
When they witness the strength in their children
When in difficult times their resilience comes through
Whether it’s a reflection in their upbringing
Or an observation about their character
And nothing makes a man more happy
Then to see his daughters thrive
Whatever comes their way
I know they will be OK
Because they have their mother’s toughness
Their ancestors’ spirit
And the freedom to be themselves
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When they witness the strength in their children
When in difficult times their resilience comes through
Whether it’s a reflection in their upbringing
Or an observation about their character
And nothing makes a man more happy
Then to see his daughters thrive
Whatever comes their way
I know they will be OK
Because they have their mother’s toughness
Their ancestors’ spirit
And the freedom to be themselves
54 Unique Words
73 Total
#daughter
#family
#inspirational
#LifeCycle
#LifeStruggles
83 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Apr 2025 5:39pm
18th Apr 2025 5:39pm
Take a chance
Let's take a moment to analyze what has been happening, in our lives that it seems that there is something, that we need to be honest with each other and come, to a understanding and about what we use to hold so true. For it's true that I thought in you that, I found a blessing in disguise, but yet it's far from the deepness of the truth. For sure I decided to take a chance, with a leap of faith and believing, that you were for me as I was for you. 🤨 But you didn't know what love really means to me, but yet you ignore that I love you with all my heart and soul. Now you stand there...
#despair
#grief
#hurt
#LifeStruggles
#suffering
101 reads
2 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 2:06pm
17th Apr 2025 2:06pm
A Reading for My Friend's Abortion
Leader: To the unborn child, we acknowledge the complexity of life's choices.
Congregation: May the soil be forgiving where we step, and the winds carry away the sorrow of our hearts.
Leader: In the solitude of decision, we wrestle with the weight of existence. We honor the potential of life, especially of the unborn.
Congregation: For the life within her, pure and innocent, born of lust, we offer our deepest apologies.
Leader: May we find strength in our shared humanity, recognizing the gravity of our decisions.
Congregation: And beseech the Universe...
Congregation: May the soil be forgiving where we step, and the winds carry away the sorrow of our hearts.
Leader: In the solitude of decision, we wrestle with the weight of existence. We honor the potential of life, especially of the unborn.
Congregation: For the life within her, pure and innocent, born of lust, we offer our deepest apologies.
Leader: May we find strength in our shared humanity, recognizing the gravity of our decisions.
Congregation: And beseech the Universe...
#atheism
#death
#LifeStruggles #religion
#LifeStruggles #religion
116 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 00:23am
17th Apr 2025 00:23am
Try & Smile
Not being happy isn't a death sentence, it's a life sentence!
#depression
#LifeStruggles
#minimalist
97 reads
9 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
16th Apr 2025 3:04pm
16th Apr 2025 3:04pm
anxiety cough
Weary of what lies ahead
The day stretched out before me, and I fret
With the knowledge, there would be painful bouts of anxiety
My coping skills weren't working
The feeling overcomes me, and I cave
running to anxiety meds that make me sleep all day
If I'm awake, I'm in pain
grouchy and short-tempered
Some doctors prescribe them, but other doctors
Say they aren't okay
I take benzos to sleep at night
and use them only during the day as a last resort
The problem with anxiety it isn't just painful
It will...
The day stretched out before me, and I fret
With the knowledge, there would be painful bouts of anxiety
My coping skills weren't working
The feeling overcomes me, and I cave
running to anxiety meds that make me sleep all day
If I'm awake, I'm in pain
grouchy and short-tempered
Some doctors prescribe them, but other doctors
Say they aren't okay
I take benzos to sleep at night
and use them only during the day as a last resort
The problem with anxiety it isn't just painful
It will...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
81 reads
2 Comments
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