Poems About Life Struggles Seeking Honest Critique
#LifeStruggles
Poems about life struggles seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 1:19pm
4th Apr 2025 1:19pm
The truth will unfold
Undeniably, shadows consume the sky.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
Inescapably the stars dim and die.
Uncharacteristically, whispers turn to screams.
Disproportionately hope fractures dreams.
Incomprehensibly, the world twists to decay.
Unexceptionally time drifts away.
Individualistically, souls stand alone.
Irresponsibly they carve from stone.
Unintentionally, paths to ruin align.
Uncompromisingly darkness claims what’s mine.
#honesty
#LifeStruggles
#mirror
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
36 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
4th Apr 2025 2:05am
4th Apr 2025 2:05am
Evil Empire
I’m an advocate for compassion and empathy
But the recent political results left me disappointed
Now the world is lacking even more sympathy
While several leaders are illogical and disjointed
But I remember that before all this came to pass
I thought maybe we should let crazy take the wheel
I mean how often do you see a vehicle driven by an ass?
Spellbound by some witchcraft in the art of the steal
I think I wished for this so that all would be revealed
So that even the most blind would eventually learn
Thou shall fucketh...
But the recent political results left me disappointed
Now the world is lacking even more sympathy
While several leaders are illogical and disjointed
But I remember that before all this came to pass
I thought maybe we should let crazy take the wheel
I mean how often do you see a vehicle driven by an ass?
Spellbound by some witchcraft in the art of the steal
I think I wished for this so that all would be revealed
So that even the most blind would eventually learn
Thou shall fucketh...
#LifeStruggles
#magic
#philosophical
49 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 8:11pm
3rd Apr 2025 8:11pm
I Love People
Who the fuck are you
Trying to fuck with?
Since you‘re nothing
But a fuckwit
I don‘t wanna be your friend
I want to put your life to an end
The more I know
The more it‘s enough
I gotta say
People piss me off
The more I know
The more it‘s enough
I gotta be honest with you
You really piss me the fuck off!
From the cradle
To the cave
You‘re such a piece of trash
Degenerate, every day!
Live and let die
I‘d rather choose the latter
The sooner you‘re dead
My heart...
Trying to fuck with?
Since you‘re nothing
But a fuckwit
I don‘t wanna be your friend
I want to put your life to an end
The more I know
The more it‘s enough
I gotta say
People piss me off
The more I know
The more it‘s enough
I gotta be honest with you
You really piss me the fuck off!
From the cradle
To the cave
You‘re such a piece of trash
Degenerate, every day!
Live and let die
I‘d rather choose the latter
The sooner you‘re dead
My heart...
#anger
#hate
#LifeStruggles
#rhyming
#TruthOfLife
68 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 8:00pm
3rd Apr 2025 8:00pm
Oh See Dee
The more we repeat the actions, the more we improve
My rituals are with me, a routine of obsessions
Already the thoughts
They dominate me
The voices tell me to be more aggressive
Perfection – symmetry – repetition – beliefs
Compulsion – cycle - anxiety – disease
My rituals are with me, a routine of obsessions
Already the thoughts
They dominate me
The voices tell me to be more aggressive
Perfection – symmetry – repetition – beliefs
Compulsion – cycle - anxiety – disease
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#MentalHealth #TruthOfLife
#MentalHealth #TruthOfLife
55 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 00:36am
3rd Apr 2025 00:36am
When you down and out
How many of us remember these great words from a popular song, that nobody wants you when you are down and out.😞 For sure those words hold true to life, for how many of us have been in that kind of situation, when life situations have you feeling like that nobody wants you around 🤔 YET when you was up on your grind coming up it's funny, how they want you around, to get help with their own situations whether it's a conversation or in caring words or it's cash or a helping hand. 🤨 But yet they remember your name and the helping hand, you done for them when they needed...
#dialogue
#LifeStruggles
#metaphor
#sadness
#StreamOfConsciousness
46 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 9:47pm
1st Apr 2025 9:47pm
Ughhhh
When people,
Pretend they're not jerking off to you,
Act like they're trying to help.
Praise Jeebus!
Pretend they're not jerking off to you,
Act like they're trying to help.
Praise Jeebus!
#LifeStruggles
46 reads
3 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 8:53pm
1st Apr 2025 8:53pm
Inner Balance + inner peace
From the deepness of your own mind and the deepness of your own life, is where your strength will find the perseverance, and the deepness of your point of relaxation in a utopia of your own sanctuary. For only you can alone touch, the deepness of your inner balance and your strength of inner senses of Peace, within the process of manifestation of what you seek. For it's true that sometimes we have to learn, to separate thyself from the negativity, in search of what we need and want in our own lives. For it's true that we are only humans of skin and flesh and blood, that we can only take...
#LifeStruggles
#SelfDiscovery
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
#suffering
52 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 10:27am
1st Apr 2025 10:27am
Stay Strong & Focused
It's so good to hear you sounding so good and happy, man that's awesome!
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You have to pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
Stay strong
Stay focused
It's good to hear about someone out there destroying it
It's so hard to do anything these days
Got that right
You have to pass through so many nowhere's and plow through so many nobody's to get anywhere
All the miles each and every day you have to go through just to get to yourself
Stay strong
Stay focused
#frustration
#LifeStruggles
#myself
#PersonalGrowth
#SelfWorth
51 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 1:58pm
31st Mar 2025 1:58pm
Drafts of nothing less
What is your purpose in this world of life, for sure are you here to better thyself or something else, comes to mind that you want to enhance people's lives in ways, that is developmental to their own lives. For truly what is your purpose in this cycle known as life. 🙏 For do you have a heart and soul to encourage, others to reach their true potential. For sure what are you here to do for others, or you here to teach them to know the difference, between what is love and what's not love. FOR there's a big difference, what love really, means to the deepness of the heart. 💗 For...
#emotional
#FeelingLost
#LifeStruggles
#StreamOfConsciousness
#suffering
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0 Comments
Loki_Undercover
Wannabe-Poet
Wannabe-Poet
Poem Published
31st Mar 2025 12:42pm
31st Mar 2025 12:42pm
Burden
I just want freedom
From a place on the finest of lines
The scenario of irrational explanations
For every fucked up situation
Since I was born, these memories significantly
Impacted me tremendously
My peers have seemed to “unintentionally” mess with me mentally
But why am I I the only one who can see?
From a place on the finest of lines
The scenario of irrational explanations
For every fucked up situation
Since I was born, these memories significantly
Impacted me tremendously
My peers have seemed to “unintentionally” mess with me mentally
But why am I I the only one who can see?
#emotions
#frustration
#LifeStruggles #MovingOn
#LifeStruggles #MovingOn
46 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 11:43pm
28th Mar 2025 11:43pm
6 weeks to go and this place is feeling played
Everyone is depressed
Not enough Wild Turkey 101 for breakfast is gonna save this bitch
I'm eating a lot of trans fat
Hope that isn't banned too
Not enough Wild Turkey 101 for breakfast is gonna save this bitch
I'm eating a lot of trans fat
Hope that isn't banned too
#alcohol
#depression
#LifeStruggles
95 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 9:39pm
28th Mar 2025 9:39pm
The Upbringing
Your parents have a problem and you live in constant pain
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what they tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
Your atmosphere is darkness as you begin to go insane
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
You hear the words of wisdom as you practice what they tell
You follow your parents teachings, as they threaten you to hell
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
My advice to you, is to follow what's in your heart
For if you don't, you'll be finished before you ever start
And the way you're going, you'll turn out the same
#LifeStruggles
#lyrics
#parent
#religion
#rhyming
82 reads
8 Comments
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