Elixir

awesome, love the theme. naive civilians make me so angry... are all countries so complacent as america??? i wanna find this guy behind the cloak

thank you. i want to find that man as well and rip his throat out:P

and a huge challenge in writing poetry is I think expressing so many things in short and amidst limitations. And despite of that you are a master in short poems which is I think something more to applause. Other than that I have appraised your subject and poems so many times. You are one of the best composers in this site.

it's an honour to receive such a feedback from you! thank you once again for your lovely words!

Scarily intense and Gothic poem, with some strange metaphors which convey the melancholic's view of death with real panache. The "drama movie" line was breathtaking.

i know it's a weird metaphor but life is weird it self isn't it? thank you jack

So much meaning in such a short passage...You're truly talented my friend :)

thanks a lot :)

I enjoy it, it has a certain feel that I like. And it isn't extremely long, so bravo!

i've almost forgotten i've written this one!
thanks for your kind words :)