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Waking up to a lickin
My heart was tickin
Feeling his tongue smear
Along my ass he rests his beard
Dripping with honey
Slurping it up he won't leave it runny
Leg wrapped around his back
Giving my pussy a gently smack
Fingers deep inside me like a key
Unlocking his treat as I start to plea
My hands holding his head
Lifting my sweet ass off the bed
Wanting me to give him my sugar
Making me scream like a cougar
Sucking every last bit
Working his way up to my tit
Giving each perky nipple a twist
Then bringing his mouth to mine for a kiss
My scent he carries on his face
Sliding his tongue in I get a taste
Holding my feet up high
He is one hell of a sexy guy
Nailing me hard with his hammer
I continue to moan and yammer
Close to bursting out his seed
Starving for it I need to feed
Placing his dick on my tongue
Pumping his creamy white cum
My heart was tickin
Feeling his tongue smear
Along my ass he rests his beard
Dripping with honey
Slurping it up he won't leave it runny
Leg wrapped around his back
Giving my pussy a gently smack
Fingers deep inside me like a key
Unlocking his treat as I start to plea
My hands holding his head
Lifting my sweet ass off the bed
Wanting me to give him my sugar
Making me scream like a cougar
Sucking every last bit
Working his way up to my tit
Giving each perky nipple a twist
Then bringing his mouth to mine for a kiss
My scent he carries on his face
Sliding his tongue in I get a taste
Holding my feet up high
He is one hell of a sexy guy
Nailing me hard with his hammer
I continue to moan and yammer
Close to bursting out his seed
Starving for it I need to feed
Placing his dick on my tongue
Pumping his creamy white cum
Published 4th Apr 2013
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4th Apr 2013 5:18pm
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4th Apr 2013 6:58pm
Hot hot HOT! Equal parts sweet and dirty! First of all, nice title, very catchy and cute. I knew I would like this before I even read it! I also enjoyed the structure you chose here; it's simple, fun and easy to read. It made the whole poem sound very playful, in a naughty kind of way.
There are so many parts I loved. For starters, "Legs wrapped around his back / giving my pussy a (gentle?) smack"
I can almost hear that out loud! Legs around the back was a nice extra visual.
"Lifting my sweet ass off the bed"
I think I may be an ass man, at least after reading this line! It's so simple, but the visual is wonderful!
"My scent he carries on his face / sticking his tongue in I get a taste"
Just sexy! And what a wonderful scent/taste that is ;)
"Nailing me hard with his hammer / I continue to moan and yammer"
Awesome rhyme and love the pun!
"Placing his dick on my tongue / pumping his creamy white cum"
The moment we've been waiting for! Awesome finish, you can't go wrong with that. I can literally see the white load dumping out on the red tongue, what a contrast!
Stellar writing as always, Tommie!
There are so many parts I loved. For starters, "Legs wrapped around his back / giving my pussy a (gentle?) smack"
I can almost hear that out loud! Legs around the back was a nice extra visual.
"Lifting my sweet ass off the bed"
I think I may be an ass man, at least after reading this line! It's so simple, but the visual is wonderful!
"My scent he carries on his face / sticking his tongue in I get a taste"
Just sexy! And what a wonderful scent/taste that is ;)
"Nailing me hard with his hammer / I continue to moan and yammer"
Awesome rhyme and love the pun!
"Placing his dick on my tongue / pumping his creamy white cum"
The moment we've been waiting for! Awesome finish, you can't go wrong with that. I can literally see the white load dumping out on the red tongue, what a contrast!
Stellar writing as always, Tommie!
4th Apr 2013 7:58pm
The title just "came " to me!This was a fun write for me.... :)
Although I enjoyed every bit of it I was thinking about how I would make it a poem as it was happening!
T&A....(tits&ass) nothing wrong with being an ass man, especially if it's a sweet ass!!Once again I'm so happy you liked it,I always look forward to your comments thank you Deepest_Fantasy
Although I enjoyed every bit of it I was thinking about how I would make it a poem as it was happening!
T&A....(tits&ass) nothing wrong with being an ass man, especially if it's a sweet ass!!Once again I'm so happy you liked it,I always look forward to your comments thank you Deepest_Fantasy
4th Apr 2013 8:15pm
Agreed, why not enjoy both a sweet ass and a fine rack? Although technically speaking I guess I'm an HTT (head to toe) kind of guy; I love it all! Of course, of course, I always enjoy reading your yummy writes!
4th Apr 2013 8:31pm
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4th Apr 2013 10:38pm
tommielynn,
What an awaesome way for you to wake up. Then in the end to get the treat....well you know what I mean ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
What an awaesome way for you to wake up. Then in the end to get the treat....well you know what I mean ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
4th Apr 2013 11:49pm
An awesome good morning rise it was!Thank you tornado, I'm glad you liked it.
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11th Feb 2016 4:01am
This is very hot awakening. Nothing like having breakfast in bed. Sweetness.
11th Feb 2016 5:18am
I forgot all about this one. So hot.
DPW, thank you for refreshing my memory and for your great comment 😊
DPW, thank you for refreshing my memory and for your great comment 😊
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21st Aug 2018 11:19pm
I truly appreciate that, Danny.
Been gone for awhile but I'm back.
Thanks for reading and your wonderful comment.
Been gone for awhile but I'm back.
Thanks for reading and your wonderful comment.
