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3 DECADES OF LIES

Kim said I was special.

Krystin said the same.

They both dumped me on a holiday,

when someone better came.

Natalie was a convict,

whom lied about her age.

Susan hid her kids from me,

Brittany needed space.

Alison wanted money,

Amen moved away.

Another Kim just wanted sex,

Heather just played games.

Becki said she loved me,

Taya said that to.

Neither one had closure,

all of them,lacked truth.

Written by jaspersilence

Published 1st Apr 2013

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Re: 3 DECADES OF LIES

Anonymous

1st Apr 2013 1:45am

Women complain about men.
Men complain about women.
Loved the last 2 lines:
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Neither one had closure,

all of them,lacked truth.
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This is what is so frustrating
about relationships. People
do not want to share why they
are breaking off....both in dating
and sadly in marriage....
So all you get is lies....
Without the truth...there can be
NO CLOSURE....and it hurts more
I think many people will identify
with this poem.
Well written
and good to read
K