Lucid Dreams

Nice verse here..speaks volumes...seems like there is more than one or two emotions behind this one-
nicely penned

Glad you can feel the depth of this :) thanks for your feedback <3

Leila

Great write from a readers point of view. This is my kinda poetry. Full of multiple thoughts and meanings.

Like, Each line in itself can be taken as a thought on its own while still contributing to the next line and the piece as a whole.

Great work Brethren.

Thank you for the awesome comment.

Peace :)

I like this. the unimportance one feels about themselves and the lies to feel adequate.

Glad you like and understand this :) Thanks

Verry interesting. i like the contrast of dreaming and waking. for what is death but the waking from one state of conciousnes to another. when you say nothing that i have is mine that statement is more profound than youd think. For everything that is material is just borrowed even our bodys. And when you say you think your dreaming when youre awake its more like you know your dreaming because were all apart of the same dream. also when you say all i am means nothing i see that as all the preocupations of the ego which gives people a false sense of a self seperate from others. And scince most people cant grasp the truth that is hard to understand lies are more easy to distract themselvs with. I enjoyed this.

I think you interpreted this better than me :) Your comment is intelligent and interesting, i love that you actually contemplated the deeper meaning here..
and i'm impressed that you picked up on the potency of the first line, most people don't.

Leila

Love this, I think everyone can relate it to themselves in some sense.