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Victoria (Lady Judas)
She never eats
She never sleeps
Just sits and stares
And cries and weeps
She looks so young
But thin and frail
Her skins so soft
So soft and pale
Her eyes are dark
Hurt and cold
Alight with fear
Such stories they hold
About the way she's suffered
Her endless pain
She doesn't dare hope
Its always the same
She will never be helped
And she will never be free
She will never escape
Escape from me.
Published 21st Mar 2013
| Edited 24th Sep 2014
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21st Mar 2013 6:16pm
21st Mar 2013 7:50pm
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate it.
I look forward to reading some of your work.
I look forward to reading some of your work.
21st Mar 2013 8:37pm
22nd Mar 2013 2:22am
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22nd Mar 2013 3:25am
oh i love this piece... i love the rhyme scheme :3 im a fan of rhyme and of dark poems :) and this is a very good one
