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The reconstruction with family
Back at the cross roads, to chose between life and death
Time to reconstruct my life for the best
I've been at my lowest low, and my highest high
Thinking back on my life, makes me wanna cry
Remember the lying, crying, and scamming
At 15 being locked up, hearing that door slamming
But as they say, listen to your heart
Mine is telling me, try a fresh start
I have nothing to lose, so its time to follow a direction
Time to restart, a new chapter of life, time to start another section
I have finally opened my eyes and can see
That it is to show who i really am, who i can be
Thank you my family, for opening your loving hearts
To come to my rescue, and help me restart
I appreciate you showing me a new way of life
Know i no longer need to sell, plot or fight
Time to reconstruct my life for the best
I've been at my lowest low, and my highest high
Thinking back on my life, makes me wanna cry
Remember the lying, crying, and scamming
At 15 being locked up, hearing that door slamming
But as they say, listen to your heart
Mine is telling me, try a fresh start
I have nothing to lose, so its time to follow a direction
Time to restart, a new chapter of life, time to start another section
I have finally opened my eyes and can see
That it is to show who i really am, who i can be
Thank you my family, for opening your loving hearts
To come to my rescue, and help me restart
I appreciate you showing me a new way of life
Know i no longer need to sell, plot or fight
Published 18th Mar 2013
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18th Mar 2013 1:20am
I'm not an expert, by any means,
but you want honest feed-back, as do I,
so I offer it.
1st, I think perhaps
you chose the wrong category,
I think it should be in "Self",
although it is a nice, up-beat
dedicational to your fam and friends.
2nd, nice phrasing, kinda like how I sometimes
write, not necessarily perfect timing and
rhyming scheme, but pretty good.
Great little
look into the Lesson of how those around you
are there for you, no matter what.
I'm glad for you.
Peace, Power and Love.
but you want honest feed-back, as do I,
so I offer it.
1st, I think perhaps
you chose the wrong category,
I think it should be in "Self",
although it is a nice, up-beat
dedicational to your fam and friends.
2nd, nice phrasing, kinda like how I sometimes
write, not necessarily perfect timing and
rhyming scheme, but pretty good.
Great little
look into the Lesson of how those around you
are there for you, no matter what.
I'm glad for you.
Peace, Power and Love.
