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Anecdotes of a mad man.
I think, therefore I am; broken. All the way. Not like, "I'm all teenie bopper n shit!!"
"If the doors of perception were cleansed everything would appear to man as it is, infinite", well Aldoux, via Mr. Blake, what you forgot to mention, is that once those doors are clensed, you can't muddy them again. Through the use of large quantities os lsd, my doors have been cleansed. Too cleansed. Aldoux failed to mention that with open mind, comes, "question all that you once thought you knew"...
Enlightenment comes with a price. Lost in my mind, "a mad man's nonsensical" is inspired, and a busy mind is put to use. Writing broken thoughts from a broken mind; the mind, a victim of a brutal psychedelic gang rape..
Question not, my lyrical stylings, for they aren't poetry. They're just thoughts.
"If the doors of perception were cleansed everything would appear to man as it is, infinite", well Aldoux, via Mr. Blake, what you forgot to mention, is that once those doors are clensed, you can't muddy them again. Through the use of large quantities os lsd, my doors have been cleansed. Too cleansed. Aldoux failed to mention that with open mind, comes, "question all that you once thought you knew"...
Enlightenment comes with a price. Lost in my mind, "a mad man's nonsensical" is inspired, and a busy mind is put to use. Writing broken thoughts from a broken mind; the mind, a victim of a brutal psychedelic gang rape..
Question not, my lyrical stylings, for they aren't poetry. They're just thoughts.
Published 7th Mar 2013
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Mr. I.
first howdy, secondly, ok:
this and your other on "adhd" are extremely hard to separate what tempo or importance you're placing, because of the groupings...its set out as long text message and is read as such...even if this is prose, try line breaks and stanzas to give the tone you're speaking in, and give each thought its own separate space, to let it sink in.
specifically on this piece,
I get what you are saying, I know Huxley, I know lsd (very well), I know cleansed doors-too late's-and prices....I can dig it, but "madness" looks a lot "madder" than this..your listing the insanity, try invoking it.
clearly just my opinions
again welcome, I and plenty of other folks 'round here are more than willing to talk and work on words if you are sincere..cheers, happy writing!
first howdy, secondly, ok:
this and your other on "adhd" are extremely hard to separate what tempo or importance you're placing, because of the groupings...its set out as long text message and is read as such...even if this is prose, try line breaks and stanzas to give the tone you're speaking in, and give each thought its own separate space, to let it sink in.
specifically on this piece,
I get what you are saying, I know Huxley, I know lsd (very well), I know cleansed doors-too late's-and prices....I can dig it, but "madness" looks a lot "madder" than this..your listing the insanity, try invoking it.
clearly just my opinions
again welcome, I and plenty of other folks 'round here are more than willing to talk and work on words if you are sincere..cheers, happy writing!
27th Mar 2013 7:19pm
you're right... we are alike... our styles.
though your definition of madness in this rant isn't up to the mark. i shall read on.
though your definition of madness in this rant isn't up to the mark. i shall read on.
