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Haiku VII

Forceful water veils
Embracing cloaked cliffs and rocks
Footloose in their fall

Written by Chiyo

(Miss Chi)

Published 6th Mar 2013

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Re: Haiku VII

Anonymous

6th Mar 2013 7:29pm

Wonderful waterfall of words!

6th Mar 2013 8:07pm

Thank you so much, Mourganna! I'm glad you like it!
I.

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Re: Haiku VII

Anonymous

7th Mar 2013 4:37am

Exquisite haiku, Iris! The last line, in particular, sounds so nice to my ear! Well done! :)

Carlene

8th Mar 2013 10:17am

I always appreciate your lovely comments, Carlene! Thank you for reading!
I.

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Re: Haiku VII

17th Jul 2013 10:39pm

I love the alliteration of the "f" in forceful, cliffs, footloose, and fall. Wonder(f)ul.

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17th Jul 2013 11:44pm

Thank you so much for your wonder(f)ul comment .-)!

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