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Last night
Last night I dreamed a dream of you
pouring flowers in my ear
I could not catch the petals dropped
But their sweetness remained clear
pouring flowers in my ear
I could not catch the petals dropped
But their sweetness remained clear
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Re: Last night
Last night I dreamed of you,
whispering to my heart.
But now I sit and count the days
when we're far apart.
I love your poem.
whispering to my heart.
But now I sit and count the days
when we're far apart.
I love your poem.
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re: Re: Last night
2nd Mar 2013 00:12am
Last night I dreamed of you,
calling to my soul.
But if I did give in to you,
surely I would lose control.
Thank you
calling to my soul.
But if I did give in to you,
surely I would lose control.
Thank you
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2nd Mar 2013 3:57am
Last night I loved you so,
as I kissed your loving face.
I brought you closer to me
and your heart began to race.
as I kissed your loving face.
I brought you closer to me
and your heart began to race.
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2nd Mar 2013 11:37am
Last night you loved me so
and my heart began to race.
Morning brought the warming sun,
but of you there was no trace.
and my heart began to race.
Morning brought the warming sun,
but of you there was no trace.
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2nd Mar 2013 6:14pm
Last night I loved you hard
with virile energy.
But I left you before the Dawn
like an Incubus entity.
with virile energy.
But I left you before the Dawn
like an Incubus entity.
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2nd Mar 2013 8:54pm
Last night you loved me hard
and left before the dawn
without your virile energy
How am I to now move on?
and left before the dawn
without your virile energy
How am I to now move on?
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2nd Mar 2013 9:09pm
Last night I made love to you,
and leave before its light.
Even though I'm gone by Day,
I'll love you every night.
and leave before its light.
Even though I'm gone by Day,
I'll love you every night.
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2nd Mar 2013 9:38pm
So far away in another world you sit and dream of me
in misty dreamlike swirl our love can only ever be
In that forest of fuzzy dreams I wait for us to meet
and in a carpet of flowers and moss we'll make love so sweet
in misty dreamlike swirl our love can only ever be
In that forest of fuzzy dreams I wait for us to meet
and in a carpet of flowers and moss we'll make love so sweet
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Yet so close but yet so far, you're just a dream away.
So I slumber every night to see you everyday.
Across vast oceans and distant lands you bring me something new.
But just know that I'm right here and I'm always loving you.
So I slumber every night to see you everyday.
Across vast oceans and distant lands you bring me something new.
But just know that I'm right here and I'm always loving you.
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Re: Last night
25th Mar 2013 11:42pm
Re: Last night
17th Dec 2014 3:28am
its awesome what the two of you did going back and forth lovely poem.
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