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My Child
You are my world
My everything
You come first
No one above you
I believe in you
You make me proud
You are my number one
The one I could not live without
I cherish you
You could do no wrong
I have your back
Even when you are
My love for you will never dwindle
Only grow with every moment
You are my world
My universe
You are my child
I love you
My everything
You come first
No one above you
I believe in you
You make me proud
You are my number one
The one I could not live without
I cherish you
You could do no wrong
I have your back
Even when you are
My love for you will never dwindle
Only grow with every moment
You are my world
My universe
You are my child
I love you
Published 22nd Feb 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 9:26am
This is quite delightful, poet.
Much enjoyed this read.
Some verse breaks could render the piece with greater fluidity....just a thought, ok.
Pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing this :-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Much enjoyed this read.
Some verse breaks could render the piece with greater fluidity....just a thought, ok.
Pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing this :-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
2nd Mar 2013 5:52am
my heart was racing when I wrote this so I tried to write it the way I was feeling it.
