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Sleeping Monster
Its catatonic isn't it?
The skyscrapers in your eyes?
The will that resist from within? Winter is shaking the cage
screaming, with hair in her face.
It's all a blast if you ask me
I could drown right now, if the sun doesn't mind
The skyscrapers in your eyes?
The will that resist from within? Winter is shaking the cage
screaming, with hair in her face.
It's all a blast if you ask me
I could drown right now, if the sun doesn't mind
Published 21st Feb 2013
| Edited 10th Jun 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 8:46am
Cool poem, clio.
Love the tone created in this.
Small queries, if I may?
*The will traht resist from within?
(Is it a spell typo...or a word I don't know?)
*Its catatonic
(Apostrophe needed here, maybe.....?)
That last line is SO powerful!
Pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing ;-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Love the tone created in this.
Small queries, if I may?
*The will traht resist from within?
(Is it a spell typo...or a word I don't know?)
*Its catatonic
(Apostrophe needed here, maybe.....?)
That last line is SO powerful!
Pen on, poet!
Thanks for sharing ;-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
23rd Feb 2013 2:51am
Yes there was a typo and I didn't intend an apostrophe.
thanx for the critique and the appreciation
thanx for the critique and the appreciation
