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Nothing to Forgive
You...
want me to forgive you.
Now...after all this time
after all that hell
I went through...for you
Really...
You must think
the imprint of your
passion is still inside me
Well...even if it was
you would never know...
You were nothing more
than the swine...I
threw my pearls to
Unworthy bastard you were...
while I allowed you
to temporarily dethrown me..
How I got tricked by my
court jester is beyond me...
Let's call it temporary insanity
Key word being "Temporary"
You asked me If I still Loved you...
the thought of this would be hysterical
had I not suffered so when I was with you...
Love ...is far too sacred a word
to even use in the same sentence as your name
Infact...when I think of you...
it makes me break out in hives...
Will I forgive you....
let's just say...
there is nothing to forgive
Not your lies...
Not your other women...
Not your deviousness....
Nothing....
There is nothing to forgive...
As long as you NEVER
call me again.
want me to forgive you.
Now...after all this time
after all that hell
I went through...for you
Really...
You must think
the imprint of your
passion is still inside me
Well...even if it was
you would never know...
You were nothing more
than the swine...I
threw my pearls to
Unworthy bastard you were...
while I allowed you
to temporarily dethrown me..
How I got tricked by my
court jester is beyond me...
Let's call it temporary insanity
Key word being "Temporary"
You asked me If I still Loved you...
the thought of this would be hysterical
had I not suffered so when I was with you...
Love ...is far too sacred a word
to even use in the same sentence as your name
Infact...when I think of you...
it makes me break out in hives...
Will I forgive you....
let's just say...
there is nothing to forgive
Not your lies...
Not your other women...
Not your deviousness....
Nothing....
There is nothing to forgive...
As long as you NEVER
call me again.
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Re: Nothing to Forgive
20th Feb 2013 10:53pm
Tell him girl!
See that's what we get when, out of loneness, deal with the court jesters of the world..... when we'll the Queen on the throne
See that's what we get when, out of loneness, deal with the court jesters of the world..... when we'll the Queen on the throne
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re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
20th Feb 2013 10:57pm
Re: Nothing to Forgive
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Feb 2013 10:57pm
20th Feb 2013 10:54pm
Fire,
I must say that flowed perfectly! Loved your lines:
"You were nothing more
than the swine...I
threw my pearls to"
Great write!
(oh and I think on line 24 you meant "had" ; )
tornado
I must say that flowed perfectly! Loved your lines:
"You were nothing more
than the swine...I
threw my pearls to"
Great write!
(oh and I think on line 24 you meant "had" ; )
tornado
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re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
20th Feb 2013 11:01pm
Hey my friend!
Typo caught and corrected thanks!
glad to see you around these parts!
Fire
Typo caught and corrected thanks!
glad to see you around these parts!
Fire
Re: Nothing to Forgive
20th Feb 2013 11:59pm
Love it Fire. Much strength and passion, no looking back just forward.
Great write dear lady. :)
Great write dear lady. :)
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re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 00:19am
Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 00:14am
Although, I understand the place where this comes from all too well; you have written a great "tell off" poem. I feel your sentiments and so unfortunate for any decent person to experience the angst and pains of betrayal, all that's invested, and the road to recovery.
I will always be a fan of yours through your trials as well as triumphantly. You are beautiful inside and out, therefore, what spills from your pen is like a custom made tatoo enscribed in each one of your readers.
I love reading from you, so, let it all out...however you must, my beautiful sister.
I will always be a fan of yours through your trials as well as triumphantly. You are beautiful inside and out, therefore, what spills from your pen is like a custom made tatoo enscribed in each one of your readers.
I love reading from you, so, let it all out...however you must, my beautiful sister.
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re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 00:21am
Girl....
the things you share with me...
after reading your comment on Lost I had real tears in my eyes because of your heartfelt sentiment to me...
I appreciate you and your pressence here so much
thank you, for reading
thank you for caring
thank you for just ....being you (smile)
Fire
the things you share with me...
after reading your comment on Lost I had real tears in my eyes because of your heartfelt sentiment to me...
I appreciate you and your pressence here so much
thank you, for reading
thank you for caring
thank you for just ....being you (smile)
Fire
re: re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 4:47am
Your very welcome; how could I not???? You are too beautiful of a person, of a talent, of an artist...(need I say more?!?!!). From my heart to ((yours))...xo
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re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 8:33pm
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re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 8:36pm
Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 4:39pm
Re: Nothing to Forgive
21st Feb 2013 8:38pm
Glad You Liked it Huntress!
Thank you for visiting my pages
and welcome to DUP!
Fire
Thank you for visiting my pages
and welcome to DUP!
Fire
Re: Nothing to Forgive
24th Feb 2013 2:35am
There is nothing to forgive...
As long as you NEVER
call me again.
There's an aching hole when someone NEEDS to have their ledger balanced, reaching out for forgiveness again.
There is a great foundation when you can handle your throne, complete and balanced withOUT having to re-visit the livid zone that jackals still carry.
That's an ascension of strength. Good to build Mistress Phoenix!
As long as you NEVER
call me again.
There's an aching hole when someone NEEDS to have their ledger balanced, reaching out for forgiveness again.
There is a great foundation when you can handle your throne, complete and balanced withOUT having to re-visit the livid zone that jackals still carry.
That's an ascension of strength. Good to build Mistress Phoenix!
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Re: Nothing to Forgive
24th Feb 2013 4:05am
I really love "You must think the imprint of your passion is still inside me" imprint is the perfect word!
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Re: Nothing to Forgive
26th Feb 2013 1:59am
Nearly there in forging a perfect weapon. It is easy to forgive a fool, because only a fool would cause the loss of something so precious.
So glad you don't think of revenge which if wrongly weilded can weaken the spirit so it is enough to pity the fool.
And anyway vengence is the department of those that are not to be seen.
Don't get mad, or even...just get ahead...there are fools a plenty in this world, but few like you.
So glad you don't think of revenge which if wrongly weilded can weaken the spirit so it is enough to pity the fool.
And anyway vengence is the department of those that are not to be seen.
Don't get mad, or even...just get ahead...there are fools a plenty in this world, but few like you.
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re: Re: Nothing to Forgive
8th Mar 2013 5:09am
T ray I just saw this comment I am sorry it took me forever to respond love!
Thank you for those BEAUtiful words to me!
xoxo
Fire
Thank you for those BEAUtiful words to me!
xoxo
Fire
Re: Nothing to Forgive
26th Feb 2013 4:50pm