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Eternity

Lyrics and poems that never rhyme
Counting ways to pass the time
The seconds it seem
When you are away
They pass so slowly
They seem like days
I want you here
By my side
Don't wash away like the tide
I need you now more than ever
Echo the words Forever and Ever..

Written by JessicaMurray

(Ghoul Queen)

Published 16th Feb 2013

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Re: Eternity

Anonymous

- Edited 17th Feb 2013 7:23am

17th Feb 2013 7:21am

What an exquisite piece...right down to the shape itself!

You have woven so beautifully the feeling of desolation and set the tone so well....of time passing s l o w l y.....wow, poet.

Please, do pen on, J M.

Thanks for sharing :-)

Cheers
Tidespotter

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