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summers in paris
each summer i go to paris to write
and each trip i make you greet me
as though you haven't seen me in ages
then you tell me i get more beautiful
with each passing year
but i'm just getting older
and it's really men not women that
get better looking with age
i pose for you by day watching your brush
as it whisks over canvas
nights are spent in quaint restaurants
where we eat only the finest foods
chasing it down with the best of the wines
later in the night i try to write
but you won't let me
you're too busy teasing and tickling me
it's impossible to concentrate
you never cease tempting me into your bed
you tell me i will be famous
once your masterpiece is complete
then when i come to paris
everyone i pass by in the city will know me
and each trip i make you greet me
as though you haven't seen me in ages
then you tell me i get more beautiful
with each passing year
but i'm just getting older
and it's really men not women that
get better looking with age
i pose for you by day watching your brush
as it whisks over canvas
nights are spent in quaint restaurants
where we eat only the finest foods
chasing it down with the best of the wines
later in the night i try to write
but you won't let me
you're too busy teasing and tickling me
it's impossible to concentrate
you never cease tempting me into your bed
you tell me i will be famous
once your masterpiece is complete
then when i come to paris
everyone i pass by in the city will know me
Written by
faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
Published 8th Feb 2013
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Re: summers in paris
Anonymous
8th Feb 2013 2:58pm
A beautiful write, Faith, with a wonderful ending! Well done! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: Re: summers in paris
8th Feb 2013 10:33pm
Thank you very much, Calene. Your wonderful remarks mean a lot to me :)
Faith
Faith
Re: summers in paris
8th Feb 2013 3:09pm
Sounds wonderful Faith. I would love to explore France, I find it alluring even though I have never been.
A beautiful pen :)
A beautiful pen :)
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re: Re: summers in paris
8th Feb 2013 10:50pm
Re: summers in paris
Anonymous
8th Feb 2013 4:28pm
What a nice poem. Paris is pretty neat. I almost had a heartattack climbing the first landing of the Eiffle Tower. LOL!! :)
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re: Re: summers in paris
9th Feb 2013 6:10pm
OMG. So sorry to hear this brought back memories of your near heartattack.
re: re: Re: summers in paris
Anonymous
10th Feb 2013 4:15am
Lol! No worries. Paris was very nice to visit. Loved the old buildings there. :)
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Re: summers in paris
Anonymous
8th Feb 2013 7:05pm
Cool shot of continental flavour here....
Love it, especially the last verse :-)
Tres bien, Faith!
Do kindly keep yer pen at it.
Peace
Tidespotter
Ps. You didn't come across other laddie there now, did you?
Hotel lobby laddie..... ;-D
Love it, especially the last verse :-)
Tres bien, Faith!
Do kindly keep yer pen at it.
Peace
Tidespotter
Ps. You didn't come across other laddie there now, did you?
Hotel lobby laddie..... ;-D
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re: Re: summers in paris
9th Feb 2013 6:27pm
So happy you liked the poem so much. thanks, tides. No dear, the laddie was from the states in the deep south. That was many years ago. :)
Cheers!
Faith
Cheers!
Faith
Re: summers in paris
Anonymous
8th Feb 2013 10:17pm
Sweet memories written down by a sweet lady!
So romantic!!!
So romantic!!!
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re: Re: summers in paris
9th Feb 2013 6:28pm
Re: summers in paris
9th Feb 2013 4:11am
How I needed something so beautifully upbeat! By the way, can't wait to see the painting!!
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re: Re: summers in paris
9th Feb 2013 8:53pm
Re: summers in paris
9th Feb 2013 5:45pm
That was a very nice piece sweets!
well written!
enjoyed the read!
Sir Lancelott
well written!
enjoyed the read!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: summers in paris
9th Feb 2013 6:08pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, Sir Lancelot. I appreciate them very much :)
Faith
Faith
Re: summers in paris
Anonymous
20th Feb 2013 2:05am
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