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Anonymous
6th Feb 2013 7:38pm
Very beautiful haiku, Iris. I can relate to this & it has moved me. Sad & touching write. I love the imagery & the gentleness of the second line. Lovely piece! Keep writing! :)
Carlene
Carlene
6th Feb 2013 8:04pm
You encourage me! Thank you so much, Carlene ... Escaped a sad dream through writing *sigh*.
8th Feb 2013 10:37am
8th Feb 2013 7:58pm
Thank you so much, knowthyself! And please, correct me if I make mistakes ... :-).
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I.
17th Jul 2013 10:28pm
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