Haiku II

just read all your poems short but great impact on all of them...looking for something a little longer and a bit deeper in the future, so you better get your english sorted out lady because my german is awful haha..peace and love

Thanks a lot, arran-darkstreet! I'm in some longer ones but all that comes out seems too intimate to share *sigh*. But I'm trying hard, I promise!

Another well-thought out & lovely haiku, Chiyo. I'm looking forward to reading more of your excellent work! Happy writing. :)
Carlene

Thank you very much, Carlene! You give me courage!

Less is often more. 17 syllables ought to be enough for anyone. Lovely poem.

I'm glad you think the 17 syllables are enough to transmit the underlying message. Thanks a lot!