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colder then ice
my heart is cold
colder then ice
i feel my life
slipping, flashing, before my eyes
i lay here cold
the feeling of joy runs
throw my body
my life is going
no longer will i feel
the things i felt
good bye cold world
your so heartless
im filled with joy
as i took my life
blood runs down my body
warm, dark beautiful red blood
im fading each second
i reached the e...
colder then ice
i feel my life
slipping, flashing, before my eyes
i lay here cold
the feeling of joy runs
throw my body
my life is going
no longer will i feel
the things i felt
good bye cold world
your so heartless
im filled with joy
as i took my life
blood runs down my body
warm, dark beautiful red blood
im fading each second
i reached the e...
Published 3rd Feb 2013
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22nd May 2013 3:46pm
Intense! Joy to you in life!
You should try to revise grammar, unless you are being ungrammatical on purpose for poetic meaning.
You should try to revise grammar, unless you are being ungrammatical on purpose for poetic meaning.
