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Alone with the ravens
I sit in the early morning
enjoying the dim light.
I see the birds gathering,
ravens black as night.
They are not afraid of me,
a ghost they cannot see.
Though I wish I could stay,
as ravens fly, I fade away.
enjoying the dim light.
I see the birds gathering,
ravens black as night.
They are not afraid of me,
a ghost they cannot see.
Though I wish I could stay,
as ravens fly, I fade away.
Published 24th Jan 2013
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24th Jan 2013 4:14am
24th Jan 2013 4:46am
24th Jan 2013 6:28am
Oo, I like these ones.
Where you build the poem up,
in so little words.
Well written.
Where you build the poem up,
in so little words.
Well written.
25th Jan 2013 3:44am
Anonymous
24th Jan 2013 4:28pm
Pure and simple lines ,though deep as well, nicely written!
28th Jan 2013 11:55pm
short and powerful, each morning I awaken to black crows, I relate to your ravens, nicely done..
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