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dream
you're pushing me around
telling me who to be
bringing me to my demise
destroying my fantasies
and I want to break free
but I dont know who to be
I look to the moon
and she waves back at me
she tells me that "they dont matter"
"but I will comfort thee"
she tells me to sleep now
that she will take care of me
I dream of a better life
someplace with out greed
someware ware I live my life
and I know I can be free
someware past the moon
and beyond the sea
as I wake slightly
I look to the moon again
too see what i could see
but this place that I have drempt of
I know could never be
telling me who to be
bringing me to my demise
destroying my fantasies
and I want to break free
but I dont know who to be
I look to the moon
and she waves back at me
she tells me that "they dont matter"
"but I will comfort thee"
she tells me to sleep now
that she will take care of me
I dream of a better life
someplace with out greed
someware ware I live my life
and I know I can be free
someware past the moon
and beyond the sea
as I wake slightly
I look to the moon again
too see what i could see
but this place that I have drempt of
I know could never be
Published 23rd Jan 2013
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23rd Jan 2013 1:11am
Merry meet, MagickGirlx. I like your poem here. I like how first it pointed out that one is trying to get in your way of your life when you know what path you want to go at. Don't let them tell you different. And the way you mentioned the moon, I was having a sense of a comfort from the goddess. This is poem given two thumbs up.
