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pure bliss
she wanted love
sweet and pure bliss
but he never even gave her a single kiss
long distance can work only for awhile
she always went the extra mile
give more and more
for less and less
as her life became more or a mess
she never let him know
how hard she worked
to make their ten months worth while
but to him she still was just a
pathetic whore
a bad liar and so selfish
tho shes still innocent
selfless and pure
he cant say hes
perfect in everyway
a father none the less
the girl never told him
i bet he was a mess
and he says shes no angel
she still has her virtue
shes still a teen as well
though she watched her life as it fell
right befor her eyes
emotionally abused
just thoughtlessly used
thos are how the last months went
until the last text was sent
sweet and pure bliss
but he never even gave her a single kiss
long distance can work only for awhile
she always went the extra mile
give more and more
for less and less
as her life became more or a mess
she never let him know
how hard she worked
to make their ten months worth while
but to him she still was just a
pathetic whore
a bad liar and so selfish
tho shes still innocent
selfless and pure
he cant say hes
perfect in everyway
a father none the less
the girl never told him
i bet he was a mess
and he says shes no angel
she still has her virtue
shes still a teen as well
though she watched her life as it fell
right befor her eyes
emotionally abused
just thoughtlessly used
thos are how the last months went
until the last text was sent
Published 9th Aug 2010
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2010 8:36am
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9th Aug 2010 9:01am
why thanks i dont think its goood and thats just one view of the subject im not saying its the only and im sure if u told it u would be the good guy
Anonymous
9th Aug 2010 9:06am
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9th Aug 2010 5:32pm
how so i would like to hear ur part of this maby i will write about ur side and ur part of it
9th Aug 2010 9:06am
AWWWW LEENA I LOVE U MAN IMA COME OVR ND GIVE U A BIG MOFO HUG! <3 THIS MADE MY DAY WORTH IT!
30th Sep 2010 11:46pm
Sup Aleena tiz Ray and mr.sin words by Ray William johnoson "you be trollin"
29th Dec 2010 1:35am
