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Common Sense
you've got me shaking
from the way your talking
my heart is breaking
but its no use crying
what a cyanide surprise
you have left for my eyes
if I had common sense
I'd cut myself or curl up and die
sticks and stones
could break my bones
but anything you say
will only fuel my lungs
don't mind us
we're just spilling our guts
if this is love
I don't want to be loved
you pollute the room
with filthy tongue
watch me choke it down
so I can throw it up
don't mind us
we're just spilling our guts
if this is love
I don't want be
hangin by the neck
before an audience of death
you can be the corpse
and I can be the killer
I can be the devil
and you can be the sinner
you can be the drugs
and I can be the dealer
everything you say
like music to my ears
failure find me
to tie me up now
cause I'm as bad
as bad as it gets
failure find me
to hang me up now
by my neck
cause I'm a fate
worse than death
what a cyanide surprise
you have left for my eyes
if I had common sense
I'd cut myself or curl up and die
from the way your talking
my heart is breaking
but its no use crying
what a cyanide surprise
you have left for my eyes
if I had common sense
I'd cut myself or curl up and die
sticks and stones
could break my bones
but anything you say
will only fuel my lungs
don't mind us
we're just spilling our guts
if this is love
I don't want to be loved
you pollute the room
with filthy tongue
watch me choke it down
so I can throw it up
don't mind us
we're just spilling our guts
if this is love
I don't want be
hangin by the neck
before an audience of death
you can be the corpse
and I can be the killer
I can be the devil
and you can be the sinner
you can be the drugs
and I can be the dealer
everything you say
like music to my ears
failure find me
to tie me up now
cause I'm as bad
as bad as it gets
failure find me
to hang me up now
by my neck
cause I'm a fate
worse than death
what a cyanide surprise
you have left for my eyes
if I had common sense
I'd cut myself or curl up and die
Published 17th Jan 2013
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20th Jan 2013 11:59pm
You say your not that good at poetry but this poem shows otherwise. "what a cyanide surprise
you have left for my eyes
if I had common sense
I'd cut myself or curl up and die" This is pretty good stuff here. I think you should work on the overall rhythm of the poem but aside from that, nice work here
you have left for my eyes
if I had common sense
I'd cut myself or curl up and die" This is pretty good stuff here. I think you should work on the overall rhythm of the poem but aside from that, nice work here
26th Feb 2013 3:05am
This was a GREAT Piece sweets!!!
I really enjoyed the write and read!!
You give good PEN!!!
Sir Lancelott
I really enjoyed the write and read!!
You give good PEN!!!
Sir Lancelott
