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SWIMMING

Freestyle
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � Breaststroke �
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �Backstroke � � � �
� � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � Butterfly � � � � � � �
� � � � And you swim away!

vivianne

Written by vivianne

Published 14th Jan 2013

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Re: SWIMMING

Anonymous

14th Jan 2013 7:33pm

I like this creative flow of words, swirling like fishes

Re: SWIMMING

15th Jan 2013 1:34pm

awww thanks..i like the simile 'swirling like fishes'

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Re: SWIMMING

15th Jan 2013 9:58pm

This reminds me a lot of E.E cummings.

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