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doin time
doin time is the hardest thing you will ever have to do.i'm not doin time alone your doin time to. my prison is bein locked up behind these bar's and walls but your prison is behind a locked heart. my doin time keeps us apart but our memories are forever in my heart.when im done doin time we will have a fresh start with life and all our love in our hearts.
Published 7th Jan 2013
| Edited 8th Jan 2013
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7th Jan 2013 9:22pm
you have a typo in the word behind, apart from that this is a nice simple poem, vart@rt
8th Jan 2013 4:30am
26th Nov 2015 11:30am
loved it. sometimes i dont think he understands me when im so depressed.. but he has my heart and will always... so this was short and sweet.
