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energy
a thousand miles between us
and I still feel your warmth
we radiate off of each other
I close my eyes
and I can see it
like steam
bounching off of the wind
back and forth
one off of the another
give and take
automatic
perfect
and I still feel your warmth
we radiate off of each other
I close my eyes
and I can see it
like steam
bounching off of the wind
back and forth
one off of the another
give and take
automatic
perfect
Published 31st Jul 2010
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Anonymous
31st Jul 2010 2:40am
Beautiful poem... Tender and deep and rich with love, warm and vibrant affection, not the kind of Technicolor puke one finds on Valentine's Day cards, but the real fucking thing. One minor quibble, though: didn't you mean "other" instead of "another," or else "off of one another"?
Anonymous
31st Jul 2010 11:53am
really like the first two lines... relate, I think...
