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How It Came To Be
Denial fights back tooth and nail
Upon its karma it seeks revenge
Lost in the rage it can't overcome
Chasing envy through angry thoughts
Taking down the options in its path
A veil is wrapped around my heart
Choking the life out of better times
If only I could untangle my feelings
And tie the knots of scrambling pasts
This outcome of hate stands stronger than all
Upon its karma it seeks revenge
Lost in the rage it can't overcome
Chasing envy through angry thoughts
Taking down the options in its path
A veil is wrapped around my heart
Choking the life out of better times
If only I could untangle my feelings
And tie the knots of scrambling pasts
This outcome of hate stands stronger than all
Published 6th Jan 2013
| Edited 17th Aug 2014
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6th Jan 2013 3:11pm
One of the best anger poems, I've read so far.
Love this stanza:
A veil is wrapped around my heart
Choking the life out of better times
If only I could untangle my feelings
And tie the knots of scrambling pasts
Wonderful.
Love this stanza:
A veil is wrapped around my heart
Choking the life out of better times
If only I could untangle my feelings
And tie the knots of scrambling pasts
Wonderful.
6th Jan 2013 6:36pm
13th Jan 2013 9:16pm
Good tight write...a few more steps to go..
Five Stages Of Grief
1. Denial and Isolation.
2. Anger.
3. Bargaining.
4. Depression.
5. Acceptance.
Five Stages Of Grief
1. Denial and Isolation.
2. Anger.
3. Bargaining.
4. Depression.
5. Acceptance.
14th Jan 2013 5:32pm
I like that.
I'll get thinking about that and see what else I can come up with.
I'll get thinking about that and see what else I can come up with.
