Take

Rides are better when they're wild!
Thanks for reading and for kind comments always:)

That is so intense, and you use very little
words to get the little hairs on the back of my neck to stand. Well done.

Blake

It was my pleasure ;) thanks for the sexy comment!

I love that reaction! Thank you!

I'm loving these short sexy poems they get to the point quickly!

All quickies should give you what you need in a short time! Lol thank you

Enjoyable quick read. But if I may offer one thing...omit "why don't you" from the last line and add "and" so it reads "go ahead and take me". As it is now, the whole poem is a direct assault of will and desire but the poem ends with a question. If that was your intent, then I appologize. But in my opinion theme and effect would be better preserved if the last line was a statement. Nicely done!

Well I wanted to show some impatience. Lol but there I hope I cleared it up! Thanks for reading :)

A HIGHLY sexual writer aren't ya .... SB .... ???

However, not cliched, just to the point & very well worded ....

Nice.

Oh & ofcourse ... very Takeable, in this instance !!!!!

Better "highly sexual" than not ;) lol
Thanks for the positive comment!

Gotta love a woman that can skip the bull shit and get right to the point. Sexy poem. The guy it was intended for is a lucky man.

Well you know I have a pretty good imagination;)
Thank you for the sweet comment.

Hmmmm ....

I guess so ... ?

Re: Your "better to BE ... than not to be" ..... as it were

In fact, yup, I agree ... Wholeheartedly !!!!!

Have to agree with DHITMAN, whoever is inspiring this stuff in ya is indeed ... The Lucky One !!!!!

Short yet to the point. Nice read hun

Right here and now ... That's a challenge I've heeded at a cemetery - on a plane - in a cab - a parking lot - in front of a church at night ...

Cool piece