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Paranoid Creature of Gentle Mistakes
Paranoid. About the pavement I walk on, what I make contact with and what I give contact to. Paranoid. Over bubbling ideas and trains of reckless thought. Out of bounds with reality and much in touch with quiet insanity. Verbally assaulted skin and physically abused conscience. A relentless conundrum.
Published 24th Jul 2010
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6th Aug 2010 12:53pm
So I read all the poems you have posted and each one is very good. Such is the slowness of my mind I had to read them a couple of times, which made them even more enjoyable.
7th Aug 2010 1:48am
Thanks! I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed them all, and don't worry, having to read twice over is a good thing!
28th Aug 2010 5:27am
I enjoyed this one very much, it has a lot of feeling in it. It haunting. I likey. Good job! :)
22nd Jan 2011 9:30pm
I love the switch of type of abuse from skin to conscience. That's a unique way to flip it around and make your readers contemplate how abuse effects different facets of ourselves.
3rd Feb 2011 3:56am
Thanks! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. Abuse comes in many forms, sometimes in ways that would never cross our minds, not immediately anyway. It is a good thing for anyone to realize and contemplate.
