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Happiness Of Positivety
Living a life in gloom is no way to live,
for it's a life of sadness and mistakes
that drag people down. Live happy because
life is short and isnt worth crying over the sadness in it.
Do all the fun things in it,
make boring things exciting.
Sadness will kill you and if i were to die,
id want to be happy and have a smile on my face
as i layed there.
The sun beat down on my face and i lied next to the water
and the water drug me in and i floated off into sea,
for being positve is the key to happiness and life.
for it's a life of sadness and mistakes
that drag people down. Live happy because
life is short and isnt worth crying over the sadness in it.
Do all the fun things in it,
make boring things exciting.
Sadness will kill you and if i were to die,
id want to be happy and have a smile on my face
as i layed there.
The sun beat down on my face and i lied next to the water
and the water drug me in and i floated off into sea,
for being positve is the key to happiness and life.
Published 23rd Jul 2010
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26th Jul 2010 10:36am
Love the poem! You may want to be a bit more careful regarding punctation and grammar, but the message of the poem itself is faultless! Sometimes it's hard to stay positive, but your poem gives encouragement because it's unashamedly upbeat and truthful. Keep up the good work!
