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What's your name?
In my time of need
where are you?
In my time of greed
where are you?
I spill my seed into you
it's not you
but it will do
Where are you?...
where are you?
In my time of greed
where are you?
I spill my seed into you
it's not you
but it will do
Where are you?...
Published 21st Dec 2012
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28th Dec 2012 5:28pm
9th Jan 2013 5:19pm
I rather enjoyed this. Short, rough, to the point. My only point of note is the ellipsis at the end of the last line seem somewhat unnecessary. Other than that, nice job.
10th Jan 2013 8:45am
27th Apr 2015 7:07pm
