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You
A horrific party I went to
A night I saw you
With her
My defeat echoed through the valley
To the mountain top
When my heart stopped
Pestilence reeks among the forgotten
As I seek a hopeful new beggining
FUCK YOU
A night I saw you
With her
My defeat echoed through the valley
To the mountain top
When my heart stopped
Pestilence reeks among the forgotten
As I seek a hopeful new beggining
FUCK YOU
Published 10th Dec 2012
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2nd Oct 2013 10:43am
I normally refrain from looking at other people's comments before writing my own but I have to agree with 13; not feeling the last stanza.
This is open to debate but it has been said by some that the true test of the end of a relationship is when the is replaced by indifference.
This is open to debate but it has been said by some that the true test of the end of a relationship is when the is replaced by indifference.
