muse ii

Those last two lines are so fucking powerful.

they say just what i needed them to say xxx

The final line is wonderful. I seem to recall a similar image from one of your other pieces, though I can't remember what it was called. For such a simple four line poem, this has a lot of oomph.

I don't recall a poem of mine with a similar image.. you'd have to find it.. if you do let m know.. glad you can feel the power in such a short piece..

Yeah I will do. I know it was one of your "sicker" pieces, and may also have had something about a woman being raped by a wolf in it.

there was one i wrote about a lady being nail to a tree/cross and fucked by wolverines.. its called restrained stream of consciousness ii

i like em sparse.. and powerful if i can get em there.. thanks!