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caveat scriptor
if i could ever capture
the sound of an ocean wave as
with anguish hits
the massive rocks then
i would easily read your silent thoughts
as you hug me goodnight..
*caveat scriptor = beware of the writer
the sound of an ocean wave as
with anguish hits
the massive rocks then
i would easily read your silent thoughts
as you hug me goodnight..
*caveat scriptor = beware of the writer
Published 6th Jul 2010
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6th Jul 2010 12:55pm
2 sad poems today.. well i suppose this one is sad only because you can't really ever get in their heads can you.. the skull's in the way.. and all the separation of elements and bodies.. space/time is an unfair bitch..
6th Jul 2010 3:53pm
indeed there are sad poems but who can blame me for feeling this way..
thanks for the comment
thanks for the comment
6th Jul 2010 5:24pm
what a beautifully written poem; very emotional and nicely written. i really like it :)
6th Jul 2010 10:18pm
thank you
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