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before death
on the surface where I resign.
before the waves drag me out to sea.
with my last few breaths of life,
I'll kiss you, gracefully.
before the waves drag me out to sea.
with my last few breaths of life,
I'll kiss you, gracefully.
Published 5th Dec 2012
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6th Dec 2012 9:02pm
This is beautiful and enchanting. The prevailing presence of hope resigned within the peace adds a layer that echoes and questions and begs to know why the resignation is there. And yet there is such a resounding peace in the last line that the previous questions are quieted and the resignation is completely accepted.
Wonderfully written. Short and powerful.
Wonderfully written. Short and powerful.
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12th Jul 2013 1:22am
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