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Penny Pinching By William Marsland.
Half buried in limestone chippings
creosoted coffins bleed;
dark brown on virgin white.
Rails rattle the tale of steam
within their polished gleam of steel.
Copper coins are placed upon
their copper bottomed heads
and spread.
creosoted coffins bleed;
dark brown on virgin white.
Rails rattle the tale of steam
within their polished gleam of steel.
Copper coins are placed upon
their copper bottomed heads
and spread.
Published 5th Jul 2010
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Anonymous
2nd Aug 2010 3:03am
I really like this piece. The sentences are perfectly constructed, and have a great lyrical flow. Can't offer any feedback, I'm afraid, as I like this too much to suggest changes, so I'll just say it's great and move on.
25th Feb 2013 11:51am
2nd Aug 2010 9:47pm
