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wolf in sheeps cl0thing.
I locked eyes with sin today
It tainted me
even before it swallowed me whole
Reeking of impurity
Hidden within a chizeled angels guise.
Of softness with an infinitely hollowed darkness
If only i had witnessed its fangs
before it had nipped me dirty.
But alas, whats done is done
and n0w i shall burn
This m0lten cave now active
Where my innocence once stayed.
It tainted me
even before it swallowed me whole
Reeking of impurity
Hidden within a chizeled angels guise.
Of softness with an infinitely hollowed darkness
If only i had witnessed its fangs
before it had nipped me dirty.
But alas, whats done is done
and n0w i shall burn
This m0lten cave now active
Where my innocence once stayed.
Published 28th Nov 2012
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28th Nov 2012 10:49pm
Dope line-->"This m0lten cave now active
Where my innocence once stayed."
I felt this ink! :-)
Where my innocence once stayed."
I felt this ink! :-)
29th Nov 2012 7:04am
29th Nov 2012 1:37am
I think I know the old tale
Hidden within a chizeled angels guise.
Of softness with an infinitely hollowed darkness
best line!!
I picture it so well, like a creepy wooden angel that you only realize is fucked up when your up close.
Hidden within a chizeled angels guise.
Of softness with an infinitely hollowed darkness
best line!!
I picture it so well, like a creepy wooden angel that you only realize is fucked up when your up close.
29th Nov 2012 7:09am
do u n0w (kn0w the old tale) :-)
its a sense of understanding that lurks only between those who have experienced it. Judging fr0m your message id say you nailed it.
Thank you!
its a sense of understanding that lurks only between those who have experienced it. Judging fr0m your message id say you nailed it.
Thank you!
29th Nov 2012 6:31pm
Love this, it reads like a painting, full of visual elements that spark the feelings they represent. Nicely done!
29th Nov 2012 7:28pm
