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Art
i should of new it from the start
that u were nothin more than jus a fine peice of art
pretty ta look at fun ta hold
jus evil in discuise u aint no prize
ur eyes lik burnin embers in my mind
aint that great
oh ur such a fake
all u ever do is take an take
an now i no that were through
that my dear is wy i wrote this for u[/font]
that u were nothin more than jus a fine peice of art
pretty ta look at fun ta hold
jus evil in discuise u aint no prize
ur eyes lik burnin embers in my mind
aint that great
oh ur such a fake
all u ever do is take an take
an now i no that were through
that my dear is wy i wrote this for u[/font]
Published 24th Jun 2010
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19th Jan 2011 1:50am
your sentiment of discovery and anger is clearly expressed and expressed well, but tell me, were you also trying to capture a certain dialect in a certain town or neighborhood?
21st Feb 2011 00:45am
31st Jan 2012 3:56am
Dig the use of broken word... gives the peice a value with out being perfect!good flow lots of cool thoughts in this.
