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slice slice slice
pale white skin
shiny silver blade
press ever
so slowly...
slice slice slice
spilling crimson pains
dull throbing begins
straght cuts
are important
slice slice slice
pour salt on
blooming high begins
sharpen blade
for another day
slice slice slice
shiny silver blade
press ever
so slowly...
slice slice slice
spilling crimson pains
dull throbing begins
straght cuts
are important
slice slice slice
pour salt on
blooming high begins
sharpen blade
for another day
slice slice slice
Published 22nd Nov 2012
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22nd Nov 2012 7:48pm
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22nd Nov 2012 8:09pm
23rd Nov 2012 8:23pm
This poem brings back the memory. Very well written, and just an amazing poem overall.
23rd Nov 2012 10:30pm
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6th Dec 2012 4:02am
Powerful stuff ! Really like the structure and the repeating of the title.
6th Dec 2012 1:00pm
