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the world before
Beautiful Creatures
are inbetween
They are
the end
The Beautiful
Afterlife is
made up of
those
Beautiful Creatures
The truth
will always
be
bits & peices
But the
Humans will
swim in
Thier lies
are inbetween
They are
the end
The Beautiful
Afterlife is
made up of
those
Beautiful Creatures
The truth
will always
be
bits & peices
But the
Humans will
swim in
Thier lies
Published 21st Nov 2012
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21st Nov 2012 8:08pm
A very unique poem! ( But the
Humans will
swim in
Thier lies ) I like your ending
DD
Humans will
swim in
Thier lies ) I like your ending
DD
21st Nov 2012 8:23pm
22nd Nov 2012 3:25am
Their lies...and then there is the in between..the truths....a truth then used to support a lie, so what was the original truth, this is the real fight. How owns that truth?
22nd Nov 2012 4:23am
22nd Nov 2012 10:22am
1st Dec 2012 4:46am
beautiful creatures are in between..
humans will swim in their lies.
thats just too good
humans will swim in their lies.
thats just too good
1st Dec 2012 5:35am
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