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Misunderstood
I live a life ambiguous
monotoness shade of twilight
multi-hued voices spew the
dismal
reality
of my existence
announcing my incompetence
attacked by
Verbal Castigation
alliteration?
no arbitration...
no, no, accusation!
Yes, accusations of being
vile
in the eyes of
you who should
love me most
degraded.
Why you ask?
All because you
Don't.
Understand.
Me.
And What?
So...you don't understand?
Uh huh...
So when I don't understand I shall
Mime
the Exemplary Example
you portray.
Don't get agitated when I do things your way!
monotoness shade of twilight
multi-hued voices spew the
dismal
reality
of my existence
announcing my incompetence
attacked by
Verbal Castigation
alliteration?
no arbitration...
no, no, accusation!
Yes, accusations of being
vile
in the eyes of
you who should
love me most
degraded.
Why you ask?
All because you
Don't.
Understand.
Me.
And What?
So...you don't understand?
Uh huh...
So when I don't understand I shall
Mime
the Exemplary Example
you portray.
Don't get agitated when I do things your way!
Published 14th Nov 2012
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14th Nov 2012 10:24am
monotoness shade of twilight
multi-hued voices spew the
dismal
reality
of my existence
announcing my incompetence
attacked by
Verbal Castigation ...............
**in the eyes of you, who should love me most degraded**
multi-hued voices spew the
dismal
reality
of my existence
announcing my incompetence
attacked by
Verbal Castigation ...............
**in the eyes of you, who should love me most degraded**
14th Nov 2012 8:59pm
14th Nov 2012 5:36pm
I enjoyed reading this, I like your structure in this the most. It's original in my eyes, I would like to read more of your poems. That's for sure. Keep up the good work
14th Nov 2012 9:02pm
:) Thanxx for taking the time to read it. I must admit that I don't know much about poetic structure; I kind of just do what comes naturally with the words on the page, but I'm glad you enjoyed it
~ Mystic ~
~ Mystic ~
