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Vours
They eat your fears
And steal you tears.
Take your soul
But not the whole,
They eat you from the heart
But that is only part.
The destruction of the towers
Is all because of vours.
They really hate the cold
Then they lose their hold.
You must escape the dream
With a friend as a team.
They come on Sorry Night
Because of all your fright.
The world will be no longer
Unless you become stronger.
You escape your fears
And take your tears.
Take back your soul
And return to be whole.
And steal you tears.
Take your soul
But not the whole,
They eat you from the heart
But that is only part.
The destruction of the towers
Is all because of vours.
They really hate the cold
Then they lose their hold.
You must escape the dream
With a friend as a team.
They come on Sorry Night
Because of all your fright.
The world will be no longer
Unless you become stronger.
You escape your fears
And take your tears.
Take back your soul
And return to be whole.
Published 12th Jun 2010
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12th Jun 2010 00:45am
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12th Jun 2010 5:29pm
14th Jun 2010 3:24am
If you were bored in class & wrote this then I wonder what you would create when you sit & give it 100% of your attention. I mean that in a good way bekuz I like your poem.....and the others. One was kinda dark, but it was still nice because something is stirring in you. And if life is bending & stretching you in all kinds of different emotional directions than be cool & happy about that. Bekuz there is a reason for it. Keep writin bekuz I like your shyt.
14th Jun 2010 10:28pm
thank u i have one that i did really well on i just have 2 type it up 1st but itz name will be: Nightmare of Monsterz
so look for it^^
so look for it^^
14th Jun 2010 10:46pm
If boredom in class leads to this kind of writing I can only imagine that excitement in class will lead to literary wonders. I've become a fan of yours, keep writing.
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